Shockingly Humbled - page 3

"She's crashing!" yells the second year anesthesiology resident. His high pitched voice slices through the alarms that pierce the green tiled operating room. His forehead creases, and his eyes are... Read More

  1. by   liebling5
    Writing is a creative release for me as well. It often is expressed in poetry. You are an excellent writer! I was with you all the way, including the "GASP" at the end!
  2. by   JemJ
    OMG so what happened????? Please!!!
  3. by   sissiesmama
    Definetly ready for the next chapter. My popcorn is popping already!

    Anne, RNC
  4. by   SleeepyRN
    I very much enjoyed your style of writing. I felt as if I were there in the middle of the chaos. Well done. I'd love to hear more "stories. "
  5. by   klone
    Did she die?
  6. by   canesdukegirl
    She made it out of the OR. When any of us asked Dr. Singh about her progress, he was polite, but vague, and just said that she was doing fine.
  7. by   klone
    How sad/scary
  8. by   tryingtopass
    Yes, I have looked at it also. Very well written. Fantastic!
  9. by   BSNbeauty
    Great Story. Wonderful writing. You need to be an author in "chicken soup for the nurses' soul".
  10. by   Lev <3
    Very dramatic!
  11. by   jrbl77
    gave me chills.
  12. by   CountyRat
    Stunning Canes, just stunning. So real that my palms started sweating and heart rate went up as if I were standing in the OR with you. Please keep writing, and please try to be published (if that is something that you want). You will soon receive a friend request from me because I want to read everything that you post.
  13. by   nicurn0213
    great, well-written story!!