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Last year we had this 30 commercial created for allnurses.com. To be displayed at a nursing trade show.
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Well it is that time again, for a new fresh video. I wanted to ask the users feedback before we make the next commercial. So what do you think we should highlight in a short commercial? Any keywords or themes we should focus on? Do you have any recommendations? You know best what your favorite features of AN. Let's make this a social project.
Of course, I waited till the last minute, only have til Friday to come up with ideas, so what say you?
Thanks in advance!
here is just a rough draft of something I put together based on some of your comments:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DV_eAWWA8A4
I am still messing around with things and settings. got lots of tweaking to do. Feel free to share feedback :) It's great to have users telling us what AN is to you and how we might best describe it to others! what better way is there? :)
We are going to the NTI critical care show, so I am thinking I should change the statement to target critical care nurses more.
the commercial can only be 30 seconds long.
I'm thinking I'll use the same format and make several videos for different forums, specialties, students etc... so users can share them with people?
I love the use of an upbeat song instead of the announcer-type narration...
I was wondering about the highlight of CCU forums until I read beyond the video... I think using the same 'format' for highlighting different forums is a great idea.... almost like a virtual business card...
good feedback that resulted in a great rough-draft!
It is over 30 seconds, though... so where are you planning on cutting it back? perhaps only one of the ipad mentions?? maybe the various sample posts could be splashed on one screen in speech bubbles or something(various positioning, mild overlap) instead of flashed separately?
Thanks for the feedback, no need to apologize :) I agree, it's a bit boring too, doesn't convey what AN is about either. Which is why I am asking you all for your advice to see what you think would make it better![]()
I want your honest opinion, not softball, warm fuzzy, feel good feedback :) Don't worry about hurting my feelings, let me have it!
I'm not good with stuff like this at all but this site has been a huge help to me, it might make it more personal if you had a way to create real people in it. Like a nurse coming home and sitting down with her cop of coffee and showing her browsing the site and laughing or something. Or them trying to tell their spouse something and them not getting it and they go run to all nurses to post instead. Caption a student stumped in their books and log in to ask on allnurses (just not in general chat or who knows the uproar that might cause )
Not sure how realistic that is but it would make things more personal and relate-able.
FranEMTnurse, CNA, LPN, EMT-I
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I like' chenoaspirit's post too, only I also feel there should be two students talking on the phone telling her classmate about the allnurses website and how many links it has, mentioning her friend could find just about anything she can find related to nursing.