Interview Thank you Card - page 2

How does this sound? Dear Mr. ......., Thank you for taking the time out of your schedule to interview me about the registered nurse position at the..........Regional Medical... Read More

  1. Visit  justchill profile page
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    Thanks. I was short and simple and added a little personal part to it. Hey, it can't hurt my chances.
  2. Visit  KelRN215 profile page
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    Quote from justchill
    How does this sound?

    Dear Mr. .......,
    Thank you for taking the time out of your schedule to interview me about the registered nurse position at the..........Regional Medical Center. I highly appreciate your time and consideration. After speaking with you, I believe that I am a great candidate for this position, offering adaptability and strong desire to learn. I value how you manage your units in a combined fashion, making teamwork a strong priority.

    I am very interested in working for you, this institution and caring for its patients. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Please feel free to contact me at any time if anything further information is need. My phone number is 000-000-0000. Thank you again for your time and consideration.

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    I changed things for identity purpose. The last line is something specific from the interview to make it more personal. The interviewer is the manager of four units (small hospital) and he told me how he operates them together so they are able to help each other with staffing and such so does that line make sense to any of you?
    I think this first sentence sounds awkward. You interview someone about a topic, you interview someone FOR a job.
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  3. Visit  justchill profile page
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    Quote from KelRN215

    I think this first sentence sounds awkward. You interview someone about a topic, you interview someone FOR a job.
    I overhauled the whole thing saying pretty much Thank you for your time and consideration. I enjoyed having the chance to interview with you. I look forward to hearing from you soon and added a sentence about a point we talked about in the interview. I think it was four or five sentences
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  4. Visit  joanna73 profile page
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    As someone who has hired for various positions in past roles, I will say that your interview thank you is a great idea, but too long. Keep it short and sweet. Four sentences maximum. As in, "thank you for meeting with me regarding x RN position. I value the way in which your unit makes teamwork a priority. I am very interested in working with you."
    Michelle.Ann and 1Jessie86 like this.
  5. Visit  ♪♫ in my ♥ profile page
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    My only comments are:

    1) Overall, well done

    2) Dump the superlatives: "highly appreciate," "very interested"

    3) Consider clearly articulating 'how' you're a great candidate for his 'team-oriented' approach with a concrete example from your life.


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