HI I really appreciate you taking the time to open and read this. So, I paid for a professional to update my resume and I am starting to regret it. My resume looks so REDUNDANT and lengthy! it looks like a lot of filler words. PROFESSIONAL SUMMARYHighly motivated, organized Nurse with diverse clinical experience in various acute care settings. Prepared to leverage valuable skills to an entry-level Registered Nurse role. Maintains excellent clinical qualifications while possessing effective communication skills, and delivers patient care procedures with empathy and compassion. Remains attentive to individuals' needs. Consistently complies with strict professional confidentiality policies and procedures including HIPAA regulations. Develops relationships with patients and nursing staff to build rapport and remain open to new procedures and knowledge within the medical field. Demonstrates excellent interpersonal skills, team collaboration, critical thinking, and professional bedside manner. Experienced in analyzing and documenting data in EPIC and Paragon. Bilingual in English and Tagalog. CORE COMPETENCIES[TABLE=width: 109%][TR][TD]Clinical Intervention & AssessmentAdaptable to Fast-paced EnvironmentsVerbal / Written CommunicationSterilization & Aseptic TechniquesInfusion Pumps, Tubing PreparationInfusion Rate ProgrammingEKG's and Vital Signs[/TD][TD]Excellent Patient Assessment SkillsPICC Line Dressing ChangesPeripheral IVsFoley Catheters / NG Tube InsertionMedication AdministrationWound ManagementAdmissions / Discharges / Transfers[/TD][TD]Data AnalysisFollows HIPAA RegulationsExcellent Patient RelationsSurgical Drain RemovalOral Airway SuctionDiagnostic Test AnalysisChart Preparation[/TD][/TR][/TABLE]CLINICAL SKILLS ASSESSMENTGenerated patient care plans to include recording assessments, interventions, outcomes, and nursing diagnoses; recorded vital signs.Collaborated with multidisciplinary team and family members to provide patient care.Administered accurate dosage of medications orally and intravenously.Assisted physicians and nursing staff with analyzing patients with multiple diagnoses.Worked with infusion pumps assembly, tubing preparation, IV medications administration, and infusion rate programming.Performed PICC line dressing changes, peripheral IVs, Foley catheter and surgical drain removals, suturing, staple removal, oral airways suction, NG tubes insertion, and wound dressing changes.Precisely followed standards, policies, and procedures including HIPAA regulations.Analyzed patients ABGs, CBC/metabolic profiles, radiological results, and EKG readings.Ensured accurate patient information, supplies necessary, and policies of specific departments were upheld.Assisted with special medical procedures including diagnostic testing and lab specimen collections.Sterilized and made minor adjustments to medical equipment.Employed strong data analysis skills and interpreted appropriate information needed to evaluate patient requirements.Facilitated admissions, discharges, and transfers. Charted and prepared care plan notes to ensure accuracy and completeness.CLINICAL ROTATIONSHOSPITAL - Senior Preceptorship (196 hours) 03/2018 - 05/2018HOSPITAL Geriatrics (54 hours) 02/2108 - 03/2018HOSPITAL - Psych / Mental Health (81 hours) 01/2018 - 02/2018HOSPITAL - Medical Surgical III (135 hours) 10/2017 - 12/2017HOSPITAL - Medical Surgical II (135 hours) 08/2017 - 10/2017HOSPITAL - Pediatric Unit (108 hours) 03/2017 - 05/2017HOSPITAL - Maternal/Child Health (108 hours) 01/2017 - 03/2017HOSPITAL - Medical/Surgical I (135 hours) 01/2016 - 12/2016Additional Clinical Experience: Private In-Home Caregiver, CITYCertified Nursing Assistant, 8/2016 - 12/2016; CITY Certified Medication Technician, 5/2012 - 8/2015EDUCATION / CERTIFICATIONSAssociate Degree in Nursing COLLEGE, CITYAssociate Degree in Liberal Arts, Emphasis in Math and ScienceBasic Life Support (BLS)Registered Nurse License - State of CaliforniaCertified Nursing Assistant (CNA)
PJishere 36 Posts Sep 25, 2018 Keep in mind I am a new grad so I dont want my resume to make it look like I am a PRO and mighty about some of these skills.
Sour Lemon 5,016 Posts Has 13 years experience. Sep 25, 2018 I think it's ridiculously busy. I don't think clinical experiences belong on a new grad resume, at all. Start over with something simple that says a little bit about you. This sounds like it was written by a mouthy robot.
PJishere 36 Posts Sep 25, 2018 That's what I think too. I feel like my resume is trying to be something that I'm not quite am yet
Rebekulous 55 Posts Specializes in Oncology. Has 5 years experience. Sep 26, 2018 I think you're right about the resume -- it's repetative, and doesn't show who "you" are in a way that would make me want to interview you. I'm a big believer in personalizing resumes to the job you're applying for, and that simpler is better. - For example, are you applying for jobs in the same specialty as your preceptorship? You could say "XXX clinical hours, including 196 hr Preceptorship in YYY specialty", rather than listing each clinical.- I don't ever put a Professional Summary on my resume, and to me it looks like almost everything there is listed somewhere else. I think Epic, and speaking Tagalog are incredibly useful skills, and should be on your resume.- I would simplify the "Clinical Skills" list. Emphasis the things that would set you apart from your peers. Are there experiences you had that most of your classmates didn't? My capstone had a project requirement, and I also had a lot of opportunities that my classmates didn't have. So I put it on my new grad resume: where the capstone was, the project I worked on/its outcomes, specific skills (especially that I managed the full load of patients by the end of the semester). If you're applying to a specific specialty, include any professional memberships that show your dedication to that area.- Include some details about your other work experience. Was there anything you did as a CNA or Med Tech that can help you adjust to an RN position? (I'm thinking things like time management, knowledge and practice of safe med administration, etc.)
PJishere 36 Posts Sep 26, 2018 I think you're right about the resume -- it's repetative, and doesn't show who "you" are in a way that would make me want to interview you. I'm a big believer in personalizing resumes to the job you're applying for, and that simpler is better. - For example, are you applying for jobs in the same specialty as your preceptorship? You could say "XXX clinical hours, including 196 hr Preceptorship in YYY specialty", rather than listing each clinical.- I don't ever put a Professional Summary on my resume, and to me it looks like almost everything there is listed somewhere else. I think Epic, and speaking Tagalog are incredibly useful skills, and should be on your resume.- I would simplify the "Clinical Skills" list. Emphasis the things that would set you apart from your peers. Are there experiences you had that most of your classmates didn't? My capstone had a project requirement, and I also had a lot of opportunities that my classmates didn't have. So I put it on my new grad resume: where the capstone was, the project I worked on/its outcomes, specific skills (especially that I managed the full load of patients by the end of the semester). If you're applying to a specific specialty, include any professional memberships that show your dedication to that area.- Include some details about your other work experience. Was there anything you did as a CNA or Med Tech that can help you adjust to an RN position? (I'm thinking things like time management, knowledge and practice of safe med administration, etc.)THANKS! i really appreciate the helpful tips. At first look at my new resume, I knew that I need to change it to make it more personal. Right now, I feel like it's just another template that wouldnt set me apart. I was hoping that my work experience details would be on the resume but the person didnt put it on there at all. Should I delete Clinical Assessments skills completely?Looks like I'll have to redo a lot of it. The resume service I chose was not worth the money i paid for =[
Leader25, ASN, BSN, RN 1,325 Posts Specializes in NICU. Has 40 years experience. Sep 26, 2018 sorry but i can not stop laughing,I saw one like this by a recent new grad hiree and guess what ...she left already ..did not make one year.Such gross exaggeration is an attempt to cover up lack of experience.These are things that are"understood" of course you will check for any errors in charting.Better be honest and state your willingness to learn and devote yourself to the profession.
PJishere 36 Posts Sep 26, 2018 sorry but i can not stop laughing,I saw one like this by a recent new grad hiree and guess what ...she left already ..did not make one year.Such gross exaggeration is an attempt to cover up lack of experience.These are things that are"understood" of course you will check for any errors in charting.Better be honest and state your willingness to learn and devote yourself to the profession.Yeah I know that. That is why I am here asking for advice. The reusme service I used obviously went over board! I feel that my old resume is much better than this. It was way simpler. She didn't even put details of my past employment, which I think is very important considering that I am a new grad.
amoLucia 7,735 Posts Specializes in retired LTC. Sep 26, 2018 Did you REALLY "sterilize and make minor adjustments to medical equipment"?I'm not nit-picking, but like others have said, this resume is too 'fluffy'.Just be sure to include your bilingual speech proficiency on your new one.
PJishere 36 Posts Sep 26, 2018 I've actually already deleted that. I thought that was strange to have "sterilize and make minor adjustments to medical equipment". I've already deleted a lot but I feel like there is still so much fluff. Even if i repost the edited version, it's still fluffy. I have to literally undo everything this person has done to my resume.
PJishere 36 Posts Sep 26, 2018 SHOULD I JUST GET RID OF THE CLINICAL SKILLS SUMMARY? especially since core competencies already mention these. Instead I can replace that portion with details of my role in my past employment?
bsyrn, ASN, RN 810 Posts Specializes in Peds, School Nurse, clinical instructor. Has 24 years experience. Sep 26, 2018 This reads more like a school catalog then resume....I would get rid of it and start over.
