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  1. what do you think of this letter. it is not required to mail anything but i am anyways :) My life experiences have helped me to realize that nursing is my calling. I feel the best about myself when I am given the opportunity to help and care for othe...
  2. is this better? My life experiences have helped me to realize that nursing is my calling. I feel the best about myself when I am given the opportunity to help and care for others, and It would be my dream to complete the Nursing Program at your incr...
  3. Thank you for your rely! It is hard to hear but helpful! I am rewriting the letter now!
  4. Essay for admission into nursing school

    revised!! My life experiences have helped me to realize that nursing is my calling. I feel the best about myself when I am given the opportunity to help and care for others, and It would be my dream to complete the Nursing Program at your incredible ...
  5. ok here is my final draft of a letter I am including with my nursing application! Any corrections or suggestions? This letter is not required but I really want to get in! Dear Dean of Admissions, My life experiences have helped me to realize that nu...
  6. Please help and give me your opinion

    Thank you all very much for your feedback! I should have mentioned in my original post that this essay or letter is not required. I am choosing to include something with my application to stand out from the rest of the applicants. I am only applying ...
  7. what do u think??

    looking to enter Nursing school and submit this letter with my application. What is your opinion? Is it lacking any points or am I going overboard on my sisters death? Honest responses needed. I wont get offended. English and writing has never been m...
  8. This is my final letter for nursing school... What do u think? Do I make all the necessary point? Do I ramble too much about myt sister? Thank you :) from a student desperate to become a nurse :) Dear Dean of Admissions, My life experiences have help...
  9. Thank you Sarah. I couldnt agree with you more about telling my sisters story. I felt the same way but my family thought it was perfect. Maybe I should talk more about my experiences having a huge DVT( Blood clot) during my pregnancy and becoming a t...
  10. Essay for admission into nursing school

    Is this too personal?? What do u guys think? I wrote this before I saw your responses.... Thank you for taking time to respond :) Dear Dean of Admissions, My life experiences have helped me to realize that nursing is my calling. I feel the best abou...
  11. Hi, I am desperately trying to get into a nursing school! It is highly competivive and hoping you can give me suggestions on things I can change or suggestions... Thank you! I have put XXX in place of my person information :) Please give honest opini...
  12. I am trying to get into a nursing school and I need to write an admission letter or essay. Last year mt application was denied and I think it was because I didn't write a letter explaining why I wanted to become a nurse and how I would benefit patie...