Good Writing Skills Are Essential

Like it or not, writing is an essential skill and you will be judged (either harshly or favorably) by your ability to communicate well in the written language. This article highlights common grammatical pitfalls to avoid. The ability to write well will get you far in your nursing career and gives you the competitive edge in a very tight job market. Nursing Students Student Assist Article

Feeling overwhelmed by her many job duties, the director of nursing (don) hastily sent out the following memorandum to the nursing staff at her facility. Instead of it being a polished professional communication, the memo is difficult to read due to poor grammar and faulty use of punctuation.

After reading this memo, what sort of impression do you have of the don? Without ever having met her, could you even entertain the thought that she is a hard-working competent professional with many years' experience under her belt? Unfortunately, her poor writing skills have sabotaged her managerial and leadership credibility and make her look dumb. In fact, it looks like something a preteen in middle school would write:

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Their is a new attendance policy for all nursing staff. It's attached to the email. A copy will be placed in your hr manual. Your expected to review as their are changes. Everyone has a new record for there attendance. Also, the committee on worker safety are about to announce it's decision, everyone will be given their own personal copy of the committee's report. If their are any questions', feel free to contact me or hr.

Like it or not, writing is an essential skill in contemporary society and you will be judged (either harshly or favorably) by your ability to communicate well in the written language. People instinctively evaluate a person's professional abilities based on the use or misuse of grammar. It is just as important for you to hone your writing skills while in nursing school, as learning to give an im injection or put in an iv. The ability to write well will get you far in your nursing career and gives you the competitive edge in a very tight job market.

Common Grammatical Errors

A singular noun (such as "patient," individual," etc.) should always be followed by a singular pronoun (he or she - not "they") and vice versa.

Do not use a plural pronoun with a singular antecedent. Incorrect: a researcher must choose a population that best fits their hypothesis. Correct: a researcher must choose a population that best fits his or her hypothesis. Incorrect: it is important for healthcare professionals to stay current on the standard of care for his or her organization. Correct: it is important for healthcare professionals to stay current on the standard of care for their organization.

Avoid run-on sentences

Two or more independent clauses incorrectly fused together (generally by a comma) form a run-on sentence. To correct a run-on sentence, separate it into two or more sentences. Incorrect: Studies are conducted to determine the real and the true, researchers place great value on identifying and removing sources of bias in their study or controlling their effects on the study findings. Correct: studies are conducted to determine the real and the true. Researchers place great value on identifying and removing sources of bias in their study or controlling their effects on the study findings.

Avoid sentence fragments

A sentence fragment is a group of words that do not form a complete thought. Incorrect: the probability level at which the results of statistical analysis are judged to indicate a statistically significant difference between the groups. Correct: statistical significance is the probability level at which the results of statistical analysis are judged to indicate a statistically significant difference between the groups.

Avoid the incorrect use of an apostrophe

The apostrophe should be used to show possession. Incorrect: if there is evidence to support a researchers hypothesis, then the statistics are useful. Correct: if there is evidence to support a researcher's hypothesis, then the statistics are useful. An apostrophe should not be used to show the plurals of nouns (which, I have noted, is a common error among millennial students). Incorrect: a statistically significant result is when the results agree with those predicted by the researcher and back up the logical linking's developed by the researcher. Correct: a statistically significant result is when the results agree with those predicted by the researcher and back up the logical linkings developed by the researcher.

Ensure the correct use of "who" and "whom."

Incorrect: It is the critically thoughtful nurse whom realizes the need for adjustment to maximize quality of care. Correct: It is the critically thoughtful nurse who realizes the need for adjustment to maximize quality of care.

Where there are words that sound alike but have different spellings and meanings (homophones), take great care in ensuring that you are using the correct version to fit the context.

Most spell checker tools are useless in detecting an incorrect homophone. Examples: your, you're; there, their, they're; affect, effect; its, it's; to, too, two.

Always remember that it is a very competitive world out there and you are selling yourself. First impressions matter. Good writing skills are essential to success in all your career endeavors. One little mistake in grammar, spelling, or punctuation can diminish your credibility, and ruin your resume, cover letter, or an otherwise stellar presentation. Don't allow poor writing to put your career on the skids. Let your writing skills accurately reflect the competent professional that you are.

Online Resources

Purdue Online Writing Lab

Pronouns: Agreement With Antecedent

Specializes in retired LTC.
nursel56 said:
Often it is those who are barely literate who use cutesy words or text-speak the most. You end up with a nightmare of plurals gone horribly wrong and highly irritating text, such as "is d tests hard cld u give me advices. in d hospitals.?"thx."

And they'll be the ones to draw the 'happy smiley face or the boo-boo frown face'! GRRRRRRR

In all my correspondences, I try to be careful, but I'll miss a typo, a singulair/plural rule, semicolon, etc here and there. For some reason, I have caught myself omitting capitalizing the very first word in a post (but OK after punctuation). But this isn't formal documentation.

Specializes in Hospice / Ambulatory Clinic.

While I do understand that we post when we are fatigued and on cell phones and those mistakes can be distinguished from mere laziness or lack or skill. What I don't understand is when people post with poor grammar because they think it doesn't matter that we should still view them as smart and professional. Or those whose use things like no capitals or a proliferation of periods as a "style".

Specializes in Hospice / Ambulatory Clinic.
chevyv said:
I thought my grammar/spelling was excellent until I took a job with paper charting. Every night I chart and have to figure out the spelling of at least one word. I have been humbled by these damn paper charts!

When I'm tired I end up putting lots of extra letters in words. Like punctiatiaon.

I highly recommend Revising Prose by Richard A. Lanham. Perfect book for taking writing to the next level no matter what field or stage of life you are in. Slightly pricey but well worth it!

Specializes in Critical Care, ED, Cath lab, CTPAC,Trauma.
tothepointeLVN said:
While I do understand that we post when we are fatigued and on cell phones and those mistakes can be distinguished from mere laziness or lack or skill. What I don't understand is when people post with poor grammar because they think it doesn't matter that we should still view them as smart and professional. Or those whose use things like no capitals or a proliferation of periods as a "style".

The no capitals are those darn IPhones/Pads and auto correct.

As for the proliferation of peroids? Guilty :o. Style? I guess, maybe? I'm not sure.

It makes sense in my mind as a pause.....Sorry:D.

I'm a writer so I take English skills seriously, though I occasionally have problems with grammar myself (I'm from the south y'all). I always thought other college students would be as conscientious, especially those applying for nursing school. Ha! What a joke!

Many of the nursing instructors have crappy spelling and grammar, too. How can I take them seriously if they can't even respond sensibly to a simple email? Argh!!

There's form and there's function, grammar and syntax. And then there is concrete form — the font and color we choose to make our composition as readable as possible. I notice that some people use Comic Sans as their default font; even the creator of the font on which Comic Sans was based thinks Comic Sans is a hideous mess.

Now imagine that font rendered in green, read on a white background.

It's not easy to read, though it gives serious topics an air of lightness and whimsy.

By the way, the treatment of personal pronouns of indefinite gender is not settled. Many writers consider the repetitive use of "he and she" and "him and her" to be verbose. "S/he" is aesthetically displeasing. Some writers simply use "she" and "her," while others alternate the use of "he" and "she," and "him" and "her."

There are exceptions to the "apostrophes are only to be used to form the possessive" rule. For instance, to make a plural of a single letter, the Associated Press Stylebook (don't forget to italicize the name of books, magazines, etc.), recommends using an apostrophe. For example, we don't want to get As in our classes; rather, we want to get A's. If I remember correctly, according to the New York Times style guide, an apostrophe is used to form acronyms plurals.

Language is fluid, and English has a particularly low viscosity.

Specializes in Hospice / Ambulatory Clinic.
Esme12 said:
The no capitals are those darn IPhones/Pads and auto correct.

As for the proliferation of peroids? Guilty :o. Style? I guess, maybe? I'm not sure.

It makes sense in my mind as a pause.....Sorry:D.

I do the pause thing to and the trailing of off of a thought..

what im talking about.. is when people selectively use caps locks and over use periods in weird places.. but they know how to make capitals when they WANT to..

I post from my cell all the time and even then the shift reflex is hard wired into my brain :D

Of this thread will soon end up with everyone scouring the previous posters message for grammatical and style errors.

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tothepointeLVN said:
When I'm tired I end up putting lots of extra letters in words. Like punctiatiaon.

I put things in quotes and use italics. I think you're only supposed to do one of those. My writing is rife with errant hyphens.

Esme - have you seen an entire paragraph with no caps and the only punctuation being three or four periods between sentence fragments? hello..you guys....i have a question for u....looked everywhere.....idk ....does this writing style look cute to u.....so original...not really....

Specializes in Critical Care, ED, Cath lab, CTPAC,Trauma.
tothepointe LVN said:
I do the pause thing to and the trailing of off of a thought..

what i'm talking about.. is when people selectively use caps locks and over use periods in weird places.. but they know how to make capitals when they WANT to..

I post from my cell all the time and even then the shift reflex is hard wired into my brain :D

Of this thread will soon end up with everyone scouring the previous posters message for grammatical and style errors.

Pointe, :lol2:...no kidding right? I read your post and I thought, "I do that" :eek:....;). I thought I better apolpgize. You notice I didn't say I'd stop? :rotfl:. Just kidding you, My response was slightly tongue in cheek. ;)

I am "slightly" less formal here on the board. I word things at times that I know could be better......but I'm on the run to cook for a house full of hungry teens fresh from the pool or to dashg someone somewhere......sigh, I love those babies.

156.....Seen those posts?oh yes,Ive seen those posts.the ones that drive me to distraction.sometimes it's a formatting issue from the IPhones/pads is the lack of paragraphs. That run on forever and ever without stopping for ever.the ones that drive me crazy are the ones that use colors these old eyes cant see.i have used the quote button just to see them.for themostpart i dont mind the different fonts like comic sans here for i know for sure they dont use it in other communication.we all know this is an informal,although professional,board.my pet peeve is the spelling,or misspelling of medical terms and meds.you know what i mean?

:lol2: I couldn't help myself, but that was hard not typing correctly. Jeeze, I am old.;)

Specializes in Hospice / Ambulatory Clinic.
nursel56 said:

Esme - have you seen an entire paragraph with no caps and the only punctuation being three or four periods between sentence fragments? hello..you guys....i have a question for u....looked everywhere.....idk ....does this writing style look cute to u.....so original...not really....

Glad I'm not the only one that noticed. Back in the day when replacement keyboards were expensive I could write it off as a broken spacebar.

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Esme12, most of your ellipses can be replaced by commas. Most of the rest can be replaced by periods. The first one above can simply be elided.

The ellipses come across as "uhhhhhhh" or "ummmmmmmm."