Resume/Cover letter review please!

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Could some of you guys kindly review my cover letter/resume real quick? I put a lot of x's in the resume just to keep my name location and place that im applying to confidential so please ignore it.

Nursing Resume - Sample.docx

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Specializes in Cardiac/Neuro Stepdown.

I feel qualified .. I AM qualified!

I believe that I will bring a multitude .. I WILL bring a multitude!

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Specializes in Telemetry.

one of the better ones I have seen on this site :)

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It really looks great to me. The content is what really matters, however, at a glance, I noticed a couple of grammatical oversights. I am NOT an expert, but see my thoughts below:

  • Remember to put commas before your conjunctions, such as "but": "My top two specialties include intensive care and emergency medicine, but..."
  • Since you already graduated, avoid using the present perfect tense in statements such as: "During my studies, I have learned to be a competent, critical thinking, holistic nurse." (Take out have)
  • It is a myth that you drop the 2nd comma in a series (the serial comma): "contributing to the health care community, patients, and their families."

Good luck.

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I actually corrected one of those three mistakes already, but I sadly handed in 1 copy so far. I will make the correct adjustments from here on out. Thanks so much!

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