Please critique my resume

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Hello! I would love your opinions of my resume. It looks much better aesthetically on word doc (for example, the "education, certification, awards" portion is organized into a box), but I am more interested in what you think of the content.

It's currently one page long, which I think is appropriate for a new grad nurse.

Summary

Apply strong work ethic, life skills and academic training as Registered Nurse to provide excellent patient care.

Education, Certification and Awards

San Jose State University-B.S. Nursing San Jose, CA x/20xx

San Jose City College-Certified E.M.T. 7/20xx

President's List at San Jose City College- 2/20xx

Registered Nurse-Maryland Board of NursingBaltimore, MD3/20xx

Basic Life SupportRescue One Training for Life Inc.Gaithersburg, MD4/20xx

Nonviolent Crisis Intervention TrainingCrisis Prevention Institute Inc.Santa Clara, CA9/20xx

Clinical Experience 9/20xx-11/20xx

Medical-Surgical Oncology Unit at Kaiser Hospital, Santa Clara, CA

Preceptorship

*Independently performed total patient assessments, administered medication, performed accurate charting procedures. Educated patients and families about relevant therapy and how to achieve short and long term health goals.

Work Experience

xx Cafe, Georgetown, Washington DC3/2013 - present

Server

*Distinguished myself by handling large groups with ease, keeping calm in stressful situations.

*Frequently completed 12-14 hour shifts without appearing tired, excellent memory with ability to quickly learn new specials, menus.

x, Campbell, CA1/2010-3/2013

Morning caretaker

*Provided hygiene care, wound care, range of motion exercises, safe patient transferring from bed to chair, medication administration, bowel and urinary care.

*Maintained compliance with safe lifting and infection prevention standards.

Nanny, South Bay and Peninsula, CA3/2003-present

*Perform all duties of a caregiver for several families with children under five.

Volunteer Work

X at Stanford Hospital, Stanford, CA7/2009-2/2010

Volunteer Care Taker

*Assisted the elderly with basic needs in their homes.

I agree, Carolina. The Air Force gave me a sample resume that's two pages, but a lot of the stuff Bayat mentioned is still relevent to me

OP - like the resume, must say! I would put your home health aide experience front.and.center. how many new grads leave school without even really knowing how to transfer patients or do an occupied bed change? uncool :) just a reminder to the hiring manager that you have clinical experience outside school. good luck! be willing to relocate - I had to.

Hello carolinapooh. I know this post was written a few years ago, but I am hoping you are still active on allnurses.com. I would love to get some feedback on a federal resume I am building on usajobs.gov. any critiques and feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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