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I would really appreciate anyone's critique or advice on my resume. Please be honest because I am really having trouble finding an RN job. I don't really think my resume is bad, but just the fact that I keep getting rejected... it makes me wonder if there's something I am doing wrong with my resume. So here's a copy, please don't mind the template or format, it got distorted when I copied it from Microsoft Word. Thanks I am really hoping that you guys could help.
Education_________________________________________________ ____
Bachelor of Science in Nursing, BSN (May 2011)
University of Missouri - Columbia
Licensure
Registered Nurse (RN), State of Missouri
Healthcare Experience____________________________________________________
Mobile Phlebotomy, Stover Medical Support Services, O'Fallon, Missouri; May 2011 - Present
Oncology 5East Unit, University Hospital, Columbia, Missouri; fall 2011; 180 hours
access, port draws, IV start, wound care, administration of medication, patient and family
education.
Nursing Station, MedZou Clinic, Columbia, Missouri; fall 2011; 90 hours
Adult Surgery 4W Stepdown Unit, University Hospital, Columbia, Missouri; fall 2010; 120+ hours
Operation Waterfall, Missouri State Emergency Duty, Hannibal, Missouri; summer 2008; 168 + hours
- In charge of monitoring soldier's health conditions and enforcing preventive measures.
- Initiated IV's to a heat casualty with the help of other certified personnel.
Professional Experience____________________________________________________
Army National Guard, 3-135 Aviation Battalion, Lebanon, Missouri; July 2006 - July 2011
- Gave classes on evaluating a casualty and other basic first aid measures.
- Continued development of leadership skills, and military courses.
Army ROTC, University of Missouri-Columbia, Spring 2007- Fall 2008
- Practiced leadership management skills and teamwork exercises.
Combat Life Saver Course, Jefferson Barracks, St. Louis, Missouri; October 2007; 32 hours
Preventive Medicine Specialist, Fort Sam Houston, San Antonio, Texas; summer 2006; 15 weeks
- Studied the spread of diseases and infections within the army.
Basic Training, Fort Leonardwood, Missouri; summer 2006; 10 weeks
- Learned basic soldier skills, maintained physical fitness, and mental alertness.
Skills________________________________________________________________ _
Photoshop, etc.
Your resume should read like a sales brochure for you. You are selling yourself to a future employer. Start out with a summary or branding statement. 3-4 lines that describes what kind of nurse you are. Include with that Hard skills and Soft skills.
Follow it up by a professional experience section for all the time where you were employed or in the military. Anything in those jobs that supports you qualifications as a nurse should have a bullet, hopefully in a challenge-action-result format rather than "responsible for", assisted with, etc.
At the end should be education and professional development. These are things that further support you case that you are the best candidate for the job. And I would probably not get into all the different clinical rotations you did, thats all part of the nursing degree and the hiring managers know that. Extra skills like speaking a second language are pretty big, and they allude to your cultural sensitivity. And don't sell short your extra years of work experience. You've shown yourself to be a responsible employee by having a job for years at a time, kids just out of school cant make that claim. Even if you don't list your age on your resume, (and I wouldn't list mine), it still comes out in the time references you make in terms of dates of graduation, etc. If I list my previous bachelors degree as 1980, ya think they don't have a reasonable idea how old I am? ;-)
Keep it short, on point and remember that it may only get 30 seconds review if it is lumped in with a whole bunch of others on somebody's desk. You can help yourself if you can make some personal contacts (networking) or doing volunteer work in a free clinic or hospital if you have time. Once you get your first break and land a nursing job, the next will be much easier. You just have to land the first one. Good luck.
i read in a response someonesuggested adding personal stuff to your resume, i would not include if you'remarried, have kids etc...this is personal and it is not legal for an employerto ask this or to consider you or not consider based off of this. they arelegally required to consider you based solely off information that would eitherhelp or hinder you from performing that specific job (kids and spouses don'tapply to that). i have been asked if i have small kids, which is not anappropriate question for an applicant and i was astounded. i have also beenasked several times if my husband is military, which is another inappropriatequestion, because their hiring decision can't legally be made on my husband'sjob. you want to show aspects of yourself in your resume, but don't getpersonal because it has nothing to do with your ability to do the job. i usedto be in human resources for a large company at one time.
KelRN215, BSN, RN
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I agree... I would never consider putting my age or any information about my personal life (whether I'm married with kids or planning to be) on my resume. In these days, it's best to keep personal things OUT of the professional realm.