Starting to become hopeless with this resume, please help?

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I would really appreciate anyone's critique or advice on my resume. Please be honest because I am really having trouble finding an RN job. I don't really think my resume is bad, but just the fact that I keep getting rejected... it makes me wonder if there's something I am doing wrong with my resume. So here's a copy, please don't mind the template or format, it got distorted when I copied it from Microsoft Word. Thanks I am really hoping that you guys could help.

Education_________________________________________________ ____

Bachelor of Science in Nursing, BSN (May 2011)

University of Missouri - Columbia

Licensure

Registered Nurse (RN), State of Missouri

Healthcare Experience____________________________________________________

Mobile Phlebotomy, Stover Medical Support Services, O'Fallon, Missouri; May 2011 - Present

  • Performed venipunctures to obtain blood samples on variety of homebound patients.
  • Managed operations in the office for phlebotomy, and medical courier services.

Oncology 5East Unit, University Hospital, Columbia, Missouri; fall 2011; 180 hours

  • Assisted with all care for patients on 5 East and Symptoms Evaluation Unit, including port

access, port draws, IV start, wound care, administration of medication, patient and family

education.

  • Documented and charted on patient admission, history, and discharge.

Nursing Station, MedZou Clinic, Columbia, Missouri; fall 2011; 90 hours

  • Served the uninsured population in Columbia by performing routine vital signs.
  • Formulated plans with other healthcare students to supply free hepatitis vaccines.

Adult Surgery 4W Stepdown Unit, University Hospital, Columbia, Missouri; fall 2010; 120+ hours

  • Completed various basic nursing tasks and specific nursing skills for assigned patients.
  • Developed time management skills necessary to complete tasks on schedule.
  • Established therapeutic communication with patients to strengthen nurse-patient bond.
  • Worked with other health team professionals to implement quality care plans for the patients.

Operation Waterfall, Missouri State Emergency Duty, Hannibal, Missouri; summer 2008; 168 + hours

- In charge of monitoring soldier's health conditions and enforcing preventive measures.

- Initiated IV's to a heat casualty with the help of other certified personnel.

Professional Experience____________________________________________________

Army National Guard, 3-135 Aviation Battalion, Lebanon, Missouri; July 2006 - July 2011

- Gave classes on evaluating a casualty and other basic first aid measures.

- Continued development of leadership skills, and military courses.

Army ROTC, University of Missouri-Columbia, Spring 2007- Fall 2008

- Practiced leadership management skills and teamwork exercises.

Combat Life Saver Course, Jefferson Barracks, St. Louis, Missouri; October 2007; 32 hours

  • Observed and initiated IV's on modules and battle buddies.
  • Performed tactical combat casualty care, care under fire, and casualty evacuation.
  • Simulated treatment of penetrating chest trauma, and various ways to control bleeding.

Preventive Medicine Specialist, Fort Sam Houston, San Antonio, Texas; summer 2006; 15 weeks

- Studied the spread of diseases and infections within the army.

Basic Training, Fort Leonardwood, Missouri; summer 2006; 10 weeks

- Learned basic soldier skills, maintained physical fitness, and mental alertness.

Skills________________________________________________________________ _

  • Bilingual in both Mandarin Chinese and English.
  • Exceptional therapeutic and interpersonal communication skills.
  • In-depth knowledge on computer software and program such as Word, Excel, Powerpoint,

Photoshop, etc.

Specializes in Pedi.
Well, they aren't anymore.

Just out of curiosity - are you American or European? It seems like Europeans use "CV" while Americans use "resume." I do believe that the European CV is actually quite a bit different than the American resume. Age is actually a protected class in the US, although discrimination is still rampant.

I was taught maybe a dozen years ago or so that it was okay to put hobbies and interests on your resume. By an elderly teacher who insisted that we learn how to fill out job applications using typewriters. The current trend, by all means, is a single-page resume that can be glanced at to glean important information. Whether you play tennis on the weekends or are a hot chick in your early 20s is irrelevant.

I agree... I would never consider putting my age or any information about my personal life (whether I'm married with kids or planning to be) on my resume. In these days, it's best to keep personal things OUT of the professional realm.

Specializes in Cardiac, Rehab.

Your resume should read like a sales brochure for you. You are selling yourself to a future employer. Start out with a summary or branding statement. 3-4 lines that describes what kind of nurse you are. Include with that Hard skills and Soft skills.

Follow it up by a professional experience section for all the time where you were employed or in the military. Anything in those jobs that supports you qualifications as a nurse should have a bullet, hopefully in a challenge-action-result format rather than "responsible for", assisted with, etc.

At the end should be education and professional development. These are things that further support you case that you are the best candidate for the job. And I would probably not get into all the different clinical rotations you did, thats all part of the nursing degree and the hiring managers know that. Extra skills like speaking a second language are pretty big, and they allude to your cultural sensitivity. And don't sell short your extra years of work experience. You've shown yourself to be a responsible employee by having a job for years at a time, kids just out of school cant make that claim. Even if you don't list your age on your resume, (and I wouldn't list mine), it still comes out in the time references you make in terms of dates of graduation, etc. If I list my previous bachelors degree as 1980, ya think they don't have a reasonable idea how old I am? ;-)

Keep it short, on point and remember that it may only get 30 seconds review if it is lumped in with a whole bunch of others on somebody's desk. You can help yourself if you can make some personal contacts (networking) or doing volunteer work in a free clinic or hospital if you have time. Once you get your first break and land a nursing job, the next will be much easier. You just have to land the first one. Good luck.

Specializes in Home Health,ID/DD, Pediatrics.

i read in a response someonesuggested adding personal stuff to your resume, i would not include if you'remarried, have kids etc...this is personal and it is not legal for an employerto ask this or to consider you or not consider based off of this. they arelegally required to consider you based solely off information that would eitherhelp or hinder you from performing that specific job (kids and spouses don'tapply to that). i have been asked if i have small kids, which is not anappropriate question for an applicant and i was astounded. i have also beenasked several times if my husband is military, which is another inappropriatequestion, because their hiring decision can't legally be made on my husband'sjob. you want to show aspects of yourself in your resume, but don't getpersonal because it has nothing to do with your ability to do the job. i usedto be in human resources for a large company at one time.

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