ambersdevi

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1. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi replied to ambersdevi's topic in Pre-Nursing Students

   alright, as much as i would love to use everyone's ideas and help i've hit a wall and i think this is what i'm turning in. hope it catches someones eye :) [color=#f79646]looking at my application...

2. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi replied to ambersdevi's topic in Pre-Nursing Students

   you thinking changing that first sentence to something more like Looking at my application one might think “this girl sure has been to a lot of colleges!”. there are 4 different colleges they...

3. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi replied to ambersdevi's topic in Pre-Nursing Students

   ok i've been dinking around with it this morning trying to rearragne and clarify things....this is getting a little overwhelming. i feel at a loss. but here goes. don't worry, i'll correct grammer i...

4. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi replied to ambersdevi's topic in Pre-Nursing Students

   thank you. i'm going to try to tie in WHY i will be a successful healthcare provider more. thank you for pointing this out. thanks silentacro for your very honest oppion. it does kind of come across...

5. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi posted a topic in Pre-Nursing Students

   i know there are lots of 'read my essay please' out there. but here is another one if someone has the time :) -i dont have much time. submitting this week!! "please address the following statements:...