I am unable to send or respond to private messages because I have not had enough posts... anyway that you for the revisions. I have added and taken away some things and I believe its a pretty good...
Ok this is nursing essay number 2. Explain in detail how you will commit to the demands and responsibilities of a nursing program? The essay is two pages doubled spaced, which is the requirement. I...
Thank you for taking time to read my essay. I did have that mind body and soul part in there but took it out during my first round of revisions, I think I will put it back in there. I will go back to...
Hey all, I am applying for nursing school in hopes of starting November 16th. I never thought I was a bad writer until now. I guess the essays i have wrote have not been as important. I have 3 essays...
Thank you so much for the feedback I really appreciate it. I will work on some more revisions. I'm feeling more confident about my work and my abilities to write so thank you guys for your
Revised. any feedback is much appreciated and criticism is welcomed. I guess I have never been a strong writer but am dedicated to getting into this nursing program. I know I have what it takes its...
it sounds like your pretty set on being in the medical field but have you every worked in a clinical setting? I became a MA first to see if it was a good fit. I have been a MA for 6 years now and...
yes you are exactly right. Its a rough draft and as I was typing I threw more crap in it to make it longer. Thank you very much for your feedback. Working on revisions