Is climbing a source of entertainment?

  1. Would you please help me check my central idea in an essay?
    The topic of the essay is "What is your favorite source of entertainment?"
    My central idea is "My favorite source of entertainment is climbing."
    Do you think climbing is or is not a source of entertainment?
    Any suggestion will be appreciated!

    Grace
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  3. by   CrufflerJJ
    Sounds decent to me.
  4. by   Miss_Piggy.RN
    Are you writing from point of view of climber or a viewer?
  5. by   neurontin
    Thank you very much, Cruffler JJ and yennefer.
    Reply to yennefer, I wrote the essay from the point of view of a climber rather than a viewer. That is why I am worried. Thanks again!

    Grace
  6. by   elkpark
    I would say that, if you find climbing entertaining, that makes climbing entertainment!
  7. by   neurontin
    Thank you very much, elkpark!
    what you said makes me feel better.

    Grace

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