Please check if this Objective Statement sound right

[tavia_yeung]

can some1 please help me correct the following objective statement for me. if it doesn't sound good can u plz help me change it so it sound better. i'm available to work any of them like ft/pt/temp and ect. so do i need to add that to my obj. statement to let employer know it, if yes then plz help me too. thank you!:)

also if u dont mind plz share your obj. statement here too so it help me get a lil more idea. thanks!

"passionate about providing patient care as a certified nursing assistant"

[tavia_yeung]

caliotter3: I just PM u my resume just to let u know, please help me critique it at your convenience. Thanks a millions times for your help:)

[caliotter3]

I sent you a PM, the document won't open for me until you respond to an email granting permission. Get back with you after I am able to open it, probably tomorrow.

[caliotter3]

Tavia

Check this out: http://www.caljobs.ca.gov They can also help you out if you go in person. There are offices all over, one in Sunnyvale and one in Campbell down on Winchester Blvd. This is all free to you.

[tavia_yeung]

caliotter3: I PM u a new link and it should work now. Sorry about that!!!!

[caliotter3]

Got it. Will PM you tomorrow.

[tavia_yeung]

I remember www.caljobs.ca.gov. It's new to me and just wanted to give u credit for provided me w/ that link before from another thread and I remember u suggested me to apply for HCR ManorCare job and I did already applied twice online, but no luck yet...still waiting for their reply. I guess I should try to go in person to apply for it b/c maybe it would help more. And I had never heard about the HCR ManorCare job before either but thanks again for letting me know about it as I recall u helped me w/ this from another thread b4. The good thing is that job dont require experience but just preferred.

[caliotter3]

I suggest that you go in person to HCR Manorcare. You might get further than applying online. All the times I have applied for jobs online I haven't gotten anywhere, most of the time my application is ignored. But if you go in person they might talk with you right then and there and hopefully hire you.

[tavia_yeung]

Got it. Will PM you tomorrow.

Thanks!!!:)

[caliotter3]

Oh, there is a facility on Winchester, I believe the address is something like 1220, it is a couple of doors up from a Taco Bell. Stay away from that place. A couple of years ago I met a nurse that was working there and she said there has been no improvement since I worked there. It is a bad place.

[tavia_yeung]

Yes, I agree w/ what u said b/c I already applied ton of applications online but it seem like they ignore it or something b/c I never receive any reply back from them, I remember there's only 1 reply back and told me that they'll keep my application in file for future until I have the 1 yr. experience. So I definitely will take your advice to go in person to apply b/c maybe I might get better luck I hope so.

[tavia_yeung]

Thanks for the info about the facility on Winchester, I'll keep that in mind!!!

[tavia_yeung]

caliotter3 for your big help. I used your critiques/advices on my revising resume and now it sound way much better than before. So today I just go in to a few more LTC facilities to filled out the job applications and submitted along with my resumes. Hopefully I hear from them soon.