Critique my cover letter! (seriously, rip this baby apart) - page 3

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Here's my cover letter that I will be sending to a new grad program. Should I add in anything regarding experiences or use their vision statement or mission at all? It's a 200ish bed christian based... Read More

  1. by BostonTerrierLoverRN
    Mar 30, '12
    It would be really cute, and at the same time really uncute if your potential hiring manager has read this thread.

    But, . . .there is some awesome advice.
  2. by troop949
    Mar 30, '12
    I'm not even in nursing school yet (waiting for my decision letter), but this thread has some awesome advice. I'll be bookmarking this one!
  3. by Cr8zyamy
    Mar 31, '12
    Well this is rather off subject and somewhat relevant, at the least it will make you say "What?".

    As a newly graduated LVN I decided to put a resume on Monster. Okay, no big deal there right? Wrong! My resume was written without the letter B. My keyboard was broken and rather than waiting to buy a new one, I eagerly posted a very creatively written resume. You might think this was a very bad thing to have done but I received quite a few responses to that resume. I even received a telephone interview from a recruiter who was intrigued and amused by it. Sometimes even a badly written resume can get a positive response. Just so you know, I would not do that again.

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