MSMC Admissions Essay Help!

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Hi,

I was wondering if anyone can help me with my essay for Mount St. Mary's Accelerated program for Fall '09. What kind of goals did you write about? Did you keep it strictly related to nursing and education or did you put in personal goals too? If so, what are some examples of it? I am not sure what they want to see from these answers. If anyone who is in the program or have been accepted doesn't mind sharing their essays with me or some pointers, that would be great! I love reading other people's stories. I am done w/ my essay but want to get more insight in case I need to add anything, especially for the goals question before I submit my application.

Thanks!