Published Nov 25, 2018
nursechilespice, LPN
25 Posts
Hello there! I was hoping to get some feedback and constructive criticism for my updated resume- I'm working as a RPN now, but I wanted to update my resume incase of any opportunities showing up.
PLEASE NOTE: the formatting from word to this website is very off- please excuse this, I'm just looking for feed back about the content I'm putting in my resume.
Here it is:
PAULINA PETIT
(ADDRESS)
(Cell Phone)
(Email)
PROFESSIONAL SKILLS
WORK HISTORY
Registered Practical Nurse August 2018- Present
West Park Health Care Center
2W- CAVC (Chronic Assisted Ventilatory Care)
Registered Practical Nurse June 2018- Present
Overnight- At home stay
PSW- Personal Support Worker May 2017- August 2018
ParaMed Home Healthcare
Housekeeping Supervisor May 2012- Feb 2017
Quality Suites Toronto Airport
CLINICAL PLACEMENT EXPERIENCE
Michael Garron Hospital- East York General January 2017-April 2017
H7- Respiratory
Humber River Hospital September 2016-December 2016
9W- Acute Medicine
McCall Center for Continuing Care January 2016-April 2016
Fourth Floor- Palliative Care
EDUCATION
Humber College Institute of Technology and Advanced Learning
Tourism Management- Travel Industry Services (Diploma) Completion: April 2014
Practical Nursing (Diploma) Completion: July 2017
CERTIFICATIONS AND LICENSES
And that's it!
Please let me know what you all think. Thank you for taking the time to read through my resume and responding! Much appreciated
Cheers
Paulina
Sour Lemon
5,016 Posts
The clinical placements are clutter. Everyone who went to nursing school completed clinical hours.
I would also take out the housekeeping and travel industry things. They can be included on an application requesting detailed work history, but they don't belong on a resume geared at obtaining a nursing job.
KelRN215, BSN, RN
1 Article; 7,349 Posts
My 2 cents: there is a lot of unnecessary fluff in here and this can be significantly shortened.
"Enjoys working in a team environment" is not a skill. Get rid of that. I'd also move that skills section to the bottom or take it out all together. Most bedside nursing positions don't care about your skills with MS Office or Adobe.
Once you've worked as a professional nurse, your clinical placements do not belong on your resume. Get rid of all of them.
I also think the descriptions of your work need not state things that every nurse can do. It drives me crazy when I see things like "medication administration" or "vital signs" listed on nursing resumes. You're a nurse, it's implied that you do those things.
scholarlea
9 Posts
On 11/25/2018 at 6:46 PM, KelRN215 said:My 2 cents: there is a lot of unnecessary fluff in here and this can be significantly shortened."Enjoys working in a team environment" is not a skill. Get rid of that. I'd also move that skills section to the bottom or take it out all together. Most bedside nursing positions don't care about your skills with MS Office or Adobe.Once you've worked as a professional nurse, your clinical placements do not belong on your resume. Get rid of all of them.I also think the descriptions of your work need not state things that every nurse can do. It drives me crazy when I see things like "medication administration" or "vital signs" listed on nursing resumes. You're a nurse, it's implied that you do those things.
I like your straight foward advice. Could you give my resume a look as well?