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Feedback and constructive criticism on my resume

Hello everyone. My name is Michelle and I have graduated in May 2012 with my BSN. I have actively been looking for a job since the beginning of september. I would greatly appreciate any feedback on my resume. Here it is:

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Your resume is all jacked up. It did not copy paste correctly so I can't give a reliable opinion. Sorry.

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I will fix that. Sorry about that.

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OBJECTIVE

To obtain a position as a registered nurse where I can fully utilize my nursing education and training; in addition to my interpersonal skills to provide the highest level of patient care.

EDUCATION

Lehman College/CUNY, Bronx, NY

01/08-05/012

- Bachelor of Science in Nursing

- GPA:3.8

Dewitt Clinton HighSchool,Bronx, NY

09/03-06/07

- RegentsHigh School Diploma, achieved June 2007

- Macys Honors Program Participant

CLINICAL EXPERIENCE

  • Fundamentals Of Nursing : Hebrew Home for the Aged, 08/10-12/10

- Medical/Surgical Nursing I:Albert Einstein-Weiler Hospital, 01/11-05/11

- Maternity/Community/Pediatrics: Jacobi MedicalCenter/North Central Bronx Hospital/Bronx Lebanon Hospital, 08/11-12/11

- Medical/Surgical Nursing II:James J. Peters Veterans Administration Hospital, 01/12-05/12

RELATED EXPERIENCE

02/08-Present,MODERN HEALTH RESOURCES, Bronx, NY

BLS Instructor

  • Teach basic life support training to prepare individuals for certification
  • Demonstrate CPR on a manikin and provide the necessary information for the candidates to prepare for the certification exam

CERTIFICATIONS

American Heart Association,Bronx, NY

  • Certified BLS Instructor; 04/30/12-04/30/14
  • ACLS Provider; 09/30/12-09/30/14

NYS Department of Health;Bureau of Emergency Medical Svc s., Albany, NY

- Certified EMT-Basic, No. 356506; 07/31/11-07/31/14

HONORS

  • Sigma Theta Tau International Society of Nursing, Delta Zeta Chapter
  • Magna Cum Laude
  • Presidential Scholar; Spring ’09, Fall ’09, Spring ‘10
  • Dean’s List: Fall ‘10

SKILLS & STRENGTHS

  • Knowledge of Microsoft Office, Word and PowerPoint
  • Team player who demonstrates strong verbal, written, and interpersonal communication skills
  • Basic ECG interpretation

REFERENCES (Contact information redacted by moderator)

Your resume looks really good. The only thing I would suggest is possibly including the total amount of clincial hours you had at each site. Is "manikin" the correct way to spell that? I thought it was spelled mannequin. I am trying to finalize my resume. All of my background is IT related and now I'm switching to nursing.

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Thank you so much. I did spell mannequin wrong!!!!!! I will also include my clincal hours as well. Thanks for the feedback.

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