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The way we were taught in school was to list our clinical experience, I tried to shorten it a bit to make it fit into one page. At first I made a resume that was two pages long, excluding the reference page, but I have not received a single call in a month!!! It makes me think it may have been too long.

Is this one single page better? Any help needed please. I took off the objectives and some stuff that seemed repetitive.

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EDUCATION

Bachelor of Science in Nursing Science, University of unknown Aug 2013

  • Honors: Sigma Theta Tau International Honor Society

PROFESSIONAL LICENSE AND CERTIFICATIONS

State of Hawaii, Registered Nurse License #1251 Sep 2013

FEMA ICS-100, ICS-200, & IS-700 Certified Sep 2012

Basic Life Support CPR Dec 2011

SUMMARY OF SKILLS AND QUALIFICATIONS

  • Spanish - Expert Fluency
  • Proficient knowledge of disease processes and healthcare terminology
  • Knowledge of utilization of hospital equipment including chest tubes, tube feedings, administration of meds via oral/IM/IV route including attaching piggyback IV tube sets and performing nasopharyngeal suctioning.
  • Excellent computer skills, including Microsoft Excel, Word, Publisher, Access, PowerPoint, & Outlook

CLINICAL ROTATIONS

Medical/Surgical Unit Unknown Medical Center Summer 2013

  • 160 Hours preceptor experience; performed patient and family education according to hospital policies
  • Provided quality care to clients with acute and chronic, complex illnesses including total care patients

Progressive, Pediatrics, Psych Unit Unknown Medical Center Spring 2013

  • 175 Hours; assessed, monitored and managed patients with complicated disorders, including renal failure
  • Provided emotional support and participated in group activities with Psych patients

Medical/Surgical, Obstetrics Unit Unknown Medical Center Fall 2012

  • 126 Hours; administered all medications, gave injections, and recorded time given using computer charting

  • Taught new mothers about child care and assessed family needs before discharge

Orthopedics Unknown Medical Center Summer 2012

  • 70 Hours; provided patient care and support to post op patients with hip, knee and back injuries
  • Provided care in stressful situations and successfully prioritized and delegated work

Assisted Living Care Unknown Home Summer 2012

  • 56 Hours; performed brief psychological assessments and provided emotional support on one on one basis

VOLUNTEER EXPERIENCE

Kuddle Korps Unknown Medical Center Nov 2010 - Mar 2011

  • 76 Hours; cuddled premature infants in the NICU to promote psychological and physical growth

WORK EXPERIENCE

Job title Workplace Aug 2008 - Present

  • Collaborate to accomplish tasks in a time sensitive manner with a high level of accuracy and productivity.
  • Excellent computer skills with the ability to work in a fast paced environment

Job title Workplace Aug 2007 - Aug 2008

  • Excellent ability to efficiently communicate with customers
  • Excellent ability to analyze information to make decisions

Cashier Workplace Mar 2005 - May 2006

  • Answer customers' questions, and provide information on procedures or policies
  • Calculate total payments received during a time period, and reconcile this with total sales

Everything doesn't look as spaced out and actually fits in one page.... and it aligns nicely, I just need some feedback.... Thank you!!!

Specializes in Complex pedi to LTC/SA & now a manager.

Unless you have been assessed as an expertly fluent individual in Spanish by an outside authority or credentialed as a medical interpreter I would list the skill as Bilingual--Spanish.

Interpretation/ translation in the healthcare environment requires credentials by a third party as per regulatory agency. That said if you are qualified look into it as this can open so many more doors for you as a licensed nurse/credentialed medical interpreter/translator.

Specializes in Complex pedi to LTC/SA & now a manager.
Specializes in Complex pedi to LTC/SA & now a manager.

I would consider rewording your skills. I can post suggestions later

Yes, that's what I was thinking, I hear short and to the point, but to me it doesn't sound like it matches the whole resume.

I was thinking of one of these two:

  • Spanish – Expert Fluency
  • Proficient knowledge of disease processes and medical terminology
  • Proficient knowledge of monitoring chest tubes, performing nasopharyngeal suctioning, administering tube feedings, and administering meds via oral/IM/IV route including attaching piggyback IV tube sets
  • Excellent computer skills and ability to work in a fast paced and stressful environment

or (this one is divided into two columns)

SUMMARY OF SKILLS AND QUALIFICATIONS

  • Spanish – Expert Fluency
  • Disease processes knowledge
  • Chest tube monitoring
  • Nasogastric suctioning
  • Tube feeding administration
  • Meds administration via oral/IM/IV route including attaching piggyback IV tube sets
  • Excellent computer skills
  • Ability to work in a fast paced and stressful environment


Yes, that's what I was thinking, I hear short and to the point, but to me it doesn't sound like it matches the whole resume.

I was thinking of one of these two:

  • Spanish - Expert Fluency
  • Proficient knowledge of disease processes and medical terminology
  • Proficient knowledge of monitoring chest tubes, performing nasopharyngeal suctioning, administering tube feedings, and administering meds via oral/IM/IV route including attaching piggyback IV tube sets
  • Excellent computer skills and ability to work in a fast paced and stressful environment

or (this one is divided into two columns)

SUMMARY OF SKILLS AND QUALIFICATIONS

  • Spanish - Expert Fluency
  • Disease processes knowledge
  • Chest tube monitoring
  • Nasogastric suctioning
  • Tube feeding administration
  • Meds administration via oral/IM/IV route including attaching piggyback IV tube sets
  • Excellent computer skills
  • Ability to work in a fast paced and stressful environment

They are minor skills, but a lot of nurses in my program haven't even performed NG suctioning or hung up the tube feedings, or hung up piggyback meds... I was able to do that in my last semester at my preceptorship, so that's why it makes me think that it would be a good idea to list it...

Thank you for looking at this JustBeachyNurse

Specializes in Pedi.
They are minor skills, but a lot of nurses in my program haven't even performed NG suctioning or hung up the tube feedings, or hung up piggyback meds... I was able to do that in my last semester at my preceptorship, so that's why it makes me think that it would be a good idea to list it...

Thank you for looking at this JustBeachyNurse

You are a new grad, no? So you've done these skills in your preceptorship how many times? Did your preceptor feel that you were "proficient" with these skills? New grads are rarely proficient at anything. Sorry, but that's the truth and I don't think it's well received when new grads present resumes that make them seem like experienced nurses. And, honestly, even if your classmates may not have done these skills, they are skills that all nurses can do. It doesn't set you apart.

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