Can someone please critique and give me advice on my new grad RN resume?

[jennifer_app]

Hi, i am having trouble getting a job here and I'm sure my resume is the reason.. If someone can help me critique it that would be great. Thank you SO much!!!

Jennifer_APP, RN, BSN

Cell Phone: (xxx)xxx-xxxx

111 Uncle Tom's Cabin

Tom's Town , Cabin State , USA

Email: [email protected]

Professional Objective

Motivational and energetic leader dedicated to driving top quality patient care. Desire a full-time Registered Nurse position that would enable me to utilize and extend my clinical and customer service skills to the fullest potential.

Education

Hogwarts Nursing School, New Town

Bachelor's in Nursing Graduated Date: May 2013

New York Registered Nurse License #: xxxxxx (May 2014)

CPR and AED ; BLS Healthcare Provider Certification (May 2014)

Clinical Experience

Student Nurse, as follows:

• Med-Surgical (Fall 2011) NYU Langone Medical Center New York, NY
  
• Med-Surgical(Spring 2012) Bellevue Hospital New York, NY
  
• Acute Psychiatric (Spring 2012) Tillary Street Women's Shelter Brooklyn, NY
  
• Oncology(Summer 2012) NYU Langone Medical Center New York, NY
  
• Med Surgical (Fall 2012) Montefiore Hospital Bronx, NY
  
• Pediatrics (Fall 2012) Maimonides Hospital Brooklyn, NY
  
• Maternity (Fall 2012) Mt. Sinai Hospital New York, NY
  
• Med Surgical (Spring 2013) NYU Langone Medical Center New York, NY
  
• Home Health Care (Spring 2013) Isabella Home Health Care Center New York, NY
  

Volunteer Experience

Volunteer, American Red Cross

* Participated in health fairs and provided teaching about topics that needed awareness such as HIV, Diabetes, STDs and more

* Marshalled in marathons and provided food for people after races

Volunteer, New York Blood Center

* Approached pedestrians and provided teaching about blood donations

* Screened people who are interested in donating blood whether they are eligible for donating or not

Professional Skills

EMR experience, Fluency in Chinese (Mandarin ), Microsoft Word, Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Excel, type 80 WPM

Personal Employment Experience

[February 2013 to November 2013]

Paralegal/Mandarin Interpreter , Law Firm of xxx xxxxxxxx Brooklyn, NY

* Assisted clients in processing their Worker's Compensation and Social Security Disability cases

* Translated to and from Chinese/Mandarin

* Used prioritization skills to implement the orders that are given in the beginning of every shift

* Maintained a professional demeanor at all times in spite of undesirable clients

* Assisted in helping medical facilities get paid by processing the appropriate documents

[March 2011- September 2012]

Customer Service Representative, Bike and Roll-Bicycle Rental Company New York, NY

* Responsible for ensuring that customers are satisfied with my service by maintaining an energetically professional demeanor

* Conducted teaching to large groups of customers about safe usage of bikes and directions

* Frequently utilized multi-task ability especially when there's a rush of customers

[June 2011- August 2011]

Sales Manager, Highway Boutique Shop New York, NY

* Ensured excellent customer service to customers

* Prioritized and delegated tasks to associates in a time efficient manner

* Took orders from company owner at the beginning of every shift and utilized critical thinking skills to implement them appropriately

Certifications

* BLS certification May 2014

* New York State RN Licensure May 2014

* Blue Belt with Red Tip certification in ITF-Taekwon-Do

* Grade 5 Piano passed with merit

References

* Available upon request

[Nurse_]

Instead of professional objective: summarize your qualifications and what makes you stand out as a candidate

Professional Objective

Motivational and energetic leader dedicated to driving top quality patient care. Desire a full-time Registered Nurse position that would enable me to utilize and extend my clinical and customer service skills to the fullest potential.

Education

Hogwarts Nursing School, New Town

Bachelor's in Nursing Graduated Date: May 2013

New York Registered Nurse License #: xxxxxx (May 2014)

CPR and AED ; BLS Healthcare Provider Certification (May 2014)

Professional Skills

Do you know any nursing transferrable skills?

EMR experience (specify... is it meditech? Cerner), Fluency in Chinese (Mandarin ), Microsoft Word, Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Excel, type 80 WPM

Certifications

* BLS certification May 2014 (duplicate) (always add the organization that issued the certification)

* New York State RN Licensure May 2014 (duplicate)

* Blue Belt with Red Tip certification in ITF-Taekwon-Do

* Grade 5 Piano passed with merit

References

* Available upon request

[jennifer_app]

thank you SO much!!!