Hello all! I have just recently graduated with my BSN last week but I have been actively looking for jobs since March (I have been licensed since August 2014). I have had several drafts of my cover letter critiqued on here, and I recently had a friend critique it. She completely overhauled it (for the better) however, she is not in the nursing field. What do you guys think of this so far? Thanks!
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Dear Ms. XXXX,
Thank you for taking this time to review my application for the Pediatric Nurse position at Random Hospital. I came across the listing on the RH careers website, and I see that you are seeking caring, knowledgeable, and hard working individuals to join the RH nursing team. I think that you will find my experience in high-volume customer service paired with my academic background has prepared me to be a useful addition to your facility healthcare team as a nurse at RH.
I am a Registered Nurse and have recently graduated with a BSN from Town College. Through my coursework, I have gained a deep understanding of health care and proper patient care. During clinical rotations in nursing school, I found pediatrics as the most rewarding rotation and hope to immerse myself in the specialty as my career. I have worked as a customer service representative at Grocery Store for the past 7 years. During that time, I have developed a passion for excellent customer service, exceptional communication skills, efficiency, and teamwork. I have excelled in Grocery Store's fast-paced and physically challenging work environment. This quality will be important in meeting the demands of a full-time nursing position.
I have had the privilege of shadowing at RH on February 13, 2015. I respect and appreciate the dedication your facility has for patient safety and patient satisfaction as well as the communication exhibited during the daily safety huddle I attended. I would love to be part of the RH Health nursing team as your vision of accountability, integrity, excellence, and patient centered care are the same principles I value as a health care professional.
Please find my resume attached for consideration for the pediatric nurse position. I can be reached at (XXX) XXX-XXXX or at [email protected] at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration and I hope to hear from you soon.
Best,
HIRE ME PLEASE, BSN, RN