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1. really need advice on college essay!

   amacalle replied to amacalle's topic in General Students

   thank you! I had a couple other people look at the essay and help me proofread. I just submitted it, only to find out from an admissions counselor that they don't really look at the essay for people who have college credit, only students right out of...

2. really need advice on college essay!

   amacalle replied to amacalle's topic in General Students

   here are some revisions I cut it down a bit and changed the intro. what do you think? “Working banker’s hours now, huh?” the men I worked with would joke as I walked down the bridge. Twice a week, I got out of work an hour early to make it to my EMT ...

3. really need advice on college essay!

   amacalle replied to amacalle's topic in General Students

   Wow! thank you guys so much for the help and specific advice ! I have definitely forgotten a lot of the rules on comma usage and will have to review them. The saddest part is I just took an English class this past semester, but the teacher was not at...

4. really need advice on college essay!

   amacalle replied to amacalle's topic in General Students

   yep there is one that is a personal statement and another that asks if there is any additional info they should know about you or your family which is tough. Unfortunately, I don't have any medical volunteering experience either. It is so competitive...

5. really need advice on college essay!

   amacalle replied to amacalle's topic in General Students

   sorry it is a little long. I also had another question. They have a second optional essay, and nothing really comes to mind for me to write about. How important do you think the other essay will be?

6. really need advice on college essay!

   amacalle posted a topic in General Students

   I have put off writing this essay and applying so long and would love some advice- writing is not my strong suit. I don't have previous medical experience and I think I probably need to add more personal stories so if you have any advice on that I wo...