ambersdevi

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1. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi replied to ambersdevi's topic in Pre-Nursing

   alright, as much as i would love to use everyone's ideas and help i've hit a wall and i think this is what i'm turning in. hope it catches someones eye :) [color=#f79646]looking at my application one might think, “this girl sure has moved around a ...

2. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi replied to ambersdevi's topic in Pre-Nursing

   you thinking changing that first sentence to something more like Looking at my application one might think “this girl sure has been to a lot of colleges!”. there are 4 different colleges they will be receiving transcripts from so i want to make it ...

3. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi replied to ambersdevi's topic in Pre-Nursing

   ok i've been dinking around with it this morning trying to rearragne and clarify things....this is getting a little overwhelming. i feel at a loss. but here goes. don't worry, i'll correct grammer i promise :) Looking at my application one ...

4. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi replied to ambersdevi's topic in Pre-Nursing

   thank you. i'm going to try to tie in WHY i will be a successful healthcare provider more. thank you for pointing this out. thanks silentacro for your very honest oppion. it does kind of come across as the underdog, totally not my intentions. i was m...

5. yes ANOTHER essay.i don't have much time

   ambersdevi posted a topic in Pre-Nursing

   i know there are lots of 'read my essay please' out there. but here is another one if someone has the time :) -i dont have much time. submitting this week!! "please address the following statements: motivation for helping others, why you will be succ...