Published Nov 10, 2012
jamaica820
36 Posts
Hello! and thank you for your time! I am hoping to get some very needed feedback on my resume and cover letter. I am worried because I moved from California to Oregon after earning my ASN in May in CA and wasn't able to take my NCLEX in OR until the beginning of October.
I moved to be closer to and take care of my mother who became very very ill. I am applying to numerous positions but specifically to an ER department that is hiring 12 RNs!
I'm not sure if my cover letter is too personal.
Thank you for your time and help! I really appreciate it!
[h=1]Here is my Resume:
Jamie Hernandez[/h]
Personal Objective
Licensed Registered Nurse, who achieves excellence working in high pressure, fast paced environments. I am able to focus and remain calm in stressful situations and enjoy the thrill and knowledge obtained while working in the field of Emergency Medicine. I am seeking a challenging position in an Emergency Department where I can expand my multi-tasking skills to help promote health to the patient and the community, while working with a team highly committed to patient satisfaction.
Certifications/Licensures
Education___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Long Beach City College, CA
Associate Degree of Nursing – Graduated: May 2012
St. Marys Medical Center Scholarship Awarded
Senior Practicum – Emergency Department - Level II Trauma St. Marys Medical Center - 162 hours
Clinical Rotations – Totaling 972 hours of clinical experience
Bachelor of Science in Nursing pending August 2013-May 2014
***Skills
[h=3]Work Experience[/h]
Office Assistant – Westside Family Practice, Tigard, OR June 2012 – Present
Student Worker – Long Beach City College, Nursing Department October 2010 – May 2011
Child Care – Portland, OR June 2008 – May 2009
Achievements and Volunteer Experience_________________________________________________________________________
Professional Memberships_____________________________________________________________________________________
*Letters of recommendation available upon request*
Here is my Cover Letter:
Jamie Hernandez
8654 NE Dyer St.
Portland, OR 97220
562-881-8012
[email protected]
November, 9th 2012
(Name)
(Title)
Address
Dear
I am applying for a Registered Nursing position at Providence Health and Services of Portland, Emergency Department.
I am a recent graduate who was awarded the Nurse Scholar scholarship through St. Marys Medical center (SMMC). I was one of the few students selected to complete their preceptorship in an Emergency Department. I gained extensive experience completing 162 hours during my preceptorship in a level II Emergency Department. If interested, I have a letter of recommendation from the registered nurse who was my preceptor while working in the ED. I was asked to work for the hospital I precepted with upon graduation, however, I made the decision to move to Oregon to become my ill mothers Home Caregiver. After 5 months of furthering my nursing skills by being a home-health nurse as well as working at a family practice part-time, I am looking forward to completing my goal of joining a fast-paced, high pressure, patient satisfaction committed Emergency Department.
I was instantly drawn to become a member of the Providence team when I accompanied my mother to the Emergency Department. I was moved and inspired by the healthcare team that provided care for my family member. There ability to get the job done quickly and efficiently while still being attentive and caring was impressive. Working for Providence Health Care and Services would be a privilege and provide me with the environment I seek focusing on the core values of compassion, respect, excellence, and stewardship.
Thank you for your time and consideration I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity.
Respectfully Yours,
Rachanee
113 Posts
I do not have extensive experience myself with nursing resumes (student). However, I thought I would chime in on a couple of grammatical errors. I have heard from several nurse recruiters that those with common errors are among the first to go. In your cover letter mothers is possessive *mother's. Also, there should be *their. I did like your content and how you highlighted your clinical experience. Best of luck to you.