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Hello! and thank you for your time! I am hoping to get some very needed feedback on my resume and cover letter. I am worried because I moved from California to Oregon after earning my ASN in May in CA and wasn't able to take my NCLEX in OR until the beginning of October.

I moved to be closer to and take care of my mother who became very very ill. I am applying to numerous positions but specifically to an ER department that is hiring 12 RNs!

I'm not sure if my cover letter is too personal.

Thank you for your time and help! I really appreciate it!

Specializes in ER.

[h=1]Here is my Resume:

Jamie Hernandez[/h]

Personal Objective

Licensed Registered Nurse, who achieves excellence working in high pressure, fast paced environments. I am able to focus and remain calm in stressful situations and enjoy the thrill and knowledge obtained while working in the field of Emergency Medicine. I am seeking a challenging position in an Emergency Department where I can expand my multi-tasking skills to help promote health to the patient and the community, while working with a team highly committed to patient satisfaction.

Certifications/Licensures

  • Licensed RN in Oregon
  • Basic Life Support (BLS)
  • Advanced Cardiac Life Support (ACLS) / Pediatric Advanced Life Support (PALS) anticipated November 2012
  • Certified Nursing Assistant (CNA)

Education___________________________________________________________________________________________________

Long Beach City College, CA

Associate Degree of Nursing – Graduated: May 2012

St. Marys Medical Center Scholarship Awarded

Senior Practicum – Emergency Department - Level II Trauma St. Marys Medical Center - 162 hours

  • Performed nursing responsibilities for 1-4 patients requiring acute-urgent care under the supervision of a preceptor during the PM shift
  • Admitted and discharged patients based on severity of illness
  • Extensive practice establishing IV access in high pressure, fast paced environments
  • Experience triaging/providing care for a large variety of trauma patients ranging from acute appendicitis to numerous bullet wounds

Clinical Rotations – Totaling 972 hours of clinical experience

  • Trauma and Cardiac Intensive Care Units – Long Beach Memorial – Extensive practice performing nursing responsibilities for ventilated patients
  • Pediatric – Long Beach Memorial
  • Telemetry – St. Marys Medical Center
  • Psychiatric – Pacific Health
  • Obstetrics – St. Marys Medical Center
  • Medical Surgical – St. Marys Medical Center
  • Medical Surgical – Bellflower Hospital
  • Long Term Care - Alamitos Bellmont Rehabilitation Center

Bachelor of Science in Nursing pending August 2013-May 2014

***Skills

  • Competent in Microsoft Applications, Pyxus Medication Administration, Epic Computer Programs

  • Proficient in complete patient assessment, nursing diagnosis, identifying expected outcomes, developing a plan of care, implementing interventions, and evaluating and documenting patient outcomes in medical/surgical, telemetry, labor/delivery, postpartum, mental health, pediatric, trauma and intensive care patients.

[h=3]Work Experience[/h]

Office Assistant – Westside Family Practice, Tigard, OR June 2012 – Present

  • Responsible for obtaining lab specimens and vital signs
  • Administered injections, prepared rooms for patient exams/procedures
  • Completed charting, filing, and maintenance of patient records as well as calling in prescriptions

Student Worker – Long Beach City College, Nursing Department October 2010 – May 2011

  • Assisted in setting up patient care scenarios for nursing students
  • Responsible for upkeep of mannequins and nursing equipment used in the nursing department
  • Trained in the use of mannequins and nursing equipment
  • Responsible for training student workers in the nursing department

Child Care – Portland, OR June 2008 – May 2009

  • Responsible for children ages 2, 8, and 12
  • Responsible for child-care and activities like shopping, cooking, ironing, laundry and mending
  • Supervised medical conditions and food choices preparing and serving nutritious meals
  • Maintained a safe, healthy and positive environment for children by preparing various activities, avoiding conflict situations and nurturing self-esteem
  • Responsible for taking the children to and from school as well as planning daily activities

Achievements and Volunteer Experience_________________________________________________________________________

  • St. Mary’s Medical Center Nurse Scholar – Competitive scholarship awarded based on GPA, interview, and volunteer experience
  • Awarded by the Muscular Dystrophy Association for being top regional fundraiser
  • Obtained a leadership letter from Nursing Student Association for chairing the Long Beach Mission Charity through LBCC
  • Volunteered as a Clinical Care Extender at St. Mary’s Medical Center on the medical surgical and telemetry floors
  • Volunteered as public liaison and medical lab assistant at Trinity Health Hospital, Minot, ND

Professional Memberships_____________________________________________________________________________________

  • Student Nurse Association at Long Beach City College (NSA)
  • National Student Nurses Association (NSNA)

*Letters of recommendation available upon request*

Specializes in ER.

Here is my Cover Letter:

Jamie Hernandez

8654 NE Dyer St.

Portland, OR 97220

562-881-8012

[email protected]

November, 9th 2012

(Name)

(Title)

Address

Dear

I am applying for a Registered Nursing position at Providence Health and Services of Portland, Emergency Department.

I am a recent graduate who was awarded the Nurse Scholar scholarship through St. Marys Medical center (SMMC). I was one of the few students selected to complete their preceptorship in an Emergency Department. I gained extensive experience completing 162 hours during my preceptorship in a level II Emergency Department. If interested, I have a letter of recommendation from the registered nurse who was my preceptor while working in the ED. I was asked to work for the hospital I precepted with upon graduation, however, I made the decision to move to Oregon to become my ill mothers Home Caregiver. After 5 months of furthering my nursing skills by being a home-health nurse as well as working at a family practice part-time, I am looking forward to completing my goal of joining a fast-paced, high pressure, patient satisfaction committed Emergency Department.

I was instantly drawn to become a member of the Providence team when I accompanied my mother to the Emergency Department. I was moved and inspired by the healthcare team that provided care for my family member. There ability to get the job done quickly and efficiently while still being attentive and caring was impressive. Working for Providence Health Care and Services would be a privilege and provide me with the environment I seek focusing on the core values of compassion, respect, excellence, and stewardship.

Thank you for your time and consideration I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity.

Respectfully Yours,

I do not have extensive experience myself with nursing resumes (student). However, I thought I would chime in on a couple of grammatical errors. I have heard from several nurse recruiters that those with common errors are among the first to go. In your cover letter mothers is possessive *mother's. Also, there should be *their. I did like your content and how you highlighted your clinical experience. Best of luck to you.

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