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1. Scholarship essay for nursing--Critique, please?

   numbersoup replied to numbersoup's topic in Nursing Student Assistance

   While the other replies were helpful, this helped me out the most. You were right on point with my thesaurus writing--I guess I was just trying to impress the judges of high school scholarship. Thank...

2. Scholarship essay for nursing--Critique, please?

   numbersoup replied to numbersoup's topic in Nursing Student Assistance

   Thank you all for the critique! I needed it a lot. I'll get to work on my final draft, using less fluffy language haha I suppose I was a little too excited for the essay. Thanks

3. Scholarship essay for nursing--Critique, please?

   numbersoup posted a topic in Nursing Student Assistance

   Hi, how are you? I need some assistance with my personal statement for a scholarship--by which I mean, I need someone to read it and point out any flaws or anything I need to work on. It would be...