Thanks for all the tips and input regarding my text. Here is the revised version if anyone wants to critique it further. I so appreciate all who responded. My deadline is looming............... ""I am...
does the cardiac monitor sound different when a lead is disconnected offa chest patch from the way it sounds when it is a real flatline (will the monitor show flatline if just one is disconnected?)...
Stitches tore through his forehead zigzagging in several different directions, leaving a path of dried blood behind. Above that, his curly brown hair was replaced with white gauze bandages. They...
Really appreciate the critique! I will work on those things as well as the head dressing which I neglected.....not sure how it looks except I am thinking maybe turban-like...but I will try to research...
I am up against a deadline for a novel I am writing about a man who is in a coma. I want to be sensitive to those who are actually dealing with this situation, as well as the nurses involved in the...
Thank you so much for your kind reply. It is extremely important that I do this with integrity. You see, I have had nine spinal operations myself (in real life) and am going through a painful time. I...