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  1. does the cardiac monitor sound different when a lead is disconnected offa chest patch from the way it sounds when it is a real flatline (will the monitor show flatline if just one is disconnected?)...
  2. revised coma description

    Stitches tore through his forehead zigzagging in several different directions, leaving a path of dried blood behind. Above that, his curly brown hair was replaced with white gauze bandages. They...
  3. revised coma description

    Really appreciate the critique! I will work on those things as well as the head dressing which I neglected.....not sure how it looks except I am thinking maybe turban-like...but I will try to research...
  4. Thanks for all the tips and input regarding my text. Here is the revised version if anyone wants to critique it further. I so appreciate all who responded. My deadline is looming............... ""I am...
  5. first grader in NICU?

    Thank you all for your input!!! The NICU I was speaking of is NEURO ICU....sorry for the misunderstanding. I guess all hospitals are
  6. Would a first grade child ever be allowed in NICU to see her father who is in a coma? Would an exception ever be made for
  7. first grader in NICU?

    Would a first grade child ever be allowed in NICU to see her father who is in a coma? Would an exception ever be made for
  8. respectfully researching

    Thank you so much for your kind reply. It is extremely important that I do this with integrity. You see, I have had nine spinal operations myself (in real life) and am going through a painful time. I...
  9. I am up against a deadline for a novel I am writing about a man who is in a coma. I want to be sensitive to those who are actually dealing with this situation, as well as the nurses involved in the...