This time around my personal statement was a bit different because I had to address why I got dismissed and how I will avoid that happening again. what I did to improve my self and how I will succeed along with my work experience, volunteer and my goals. It was hard to fit it all into one page. But I changed my margins a little and that helped. For my first one I wrote about what made me passionate about nursing and why and went on to talk about the same things work experience, volunteering, and goals.