Opinion on my Practical Nursing Entrance essay

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I have selected practical nursing as a career path for multiple reasons. The first reason being that I posses an abundance of compassion for helping people in need regardless of the situation. Secondly, in the past I have had a few diagnoses that prompted me to start researching on my own and while researching I found such an interest not only in what I was diagnosed with but becoming a part if the medical world. Finally, helping with the care of my grandfather while he was recovering from

open heart surgery and again when he was going through the end stages of Congestive Heart Failure. This brought me to the decision that nursing is what I want to do in life. In closing, I feel the art of nursing comes naturally to me and I would love the opportunity to combine my compassion for helping other with a career

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Sounds professional and right on the money. Some grammar or spelling issues. One thing: I would exclude the part about having health problems of your own. It's a truth that in medicine there is not much concern for the weary practitioner. Reword that to concern for your family member's health issues.

Edit: to add. If your screen name is truly your name, I would contact allnurses administration to allow you to change it to something not recognizable as you.

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Thank you very much for your feedback. Truely appreciated. Correcting now......thanks again!

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You just go to the very bottom of the page: Help Desk... click on link and post your request.

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