Proofreader help

[Achoo!, LPN]

Hi all!

Well it is time to send in some new scholarship applications. Although I have passed my english classes with A's, I really don't have a very creative gene. Would someone be willing to proofread the letter that I wrote to go along with my application?? I am not very good at explaining myself or being persuasive, so any help would be greatly appreciated. I could send it private message. Thanks!!

[Berta]

I tried to post this as a pm, but I can't find the key. Where did they move it to?

Berta

[Lasoniamacaroni]

Go ahead and pm it to me. I will see if I can help ya!!!

[Achoo!, LPN]

Thank you! :) Let's seeif I can figure this out now... LOL:)

[jenrninmi, MSN, RN]

Me too! Writing is my specialty!

[Achoo!, LPN]

Me too! Writing is my specialty!

Pm sent. Thank you so much!! I need these scholarships!! LOL