Does my cover letter look ok?

[EP10]

I am a newly licensed RN in NYC looking for my first nursing job. Can anyone tell me if this cover letter is okay/what a new RN type of cover letter is supposed to be like?

Thanks so much!!

[name removed]

[address/phone/email removed]

March 9, 2016

Hiring Manager

[hospital name removed]

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm highly interested in a Registered Nurse position for new graduates at [hospital name removed]. I graduated in December 2015 from the [college removed] Bachelor of Science in Nursing program. As a newly licensed registered nurse, I believe I can be a valuable asset to the community of healthcare team member at your distinguished facility.

My experiences during my varied clinical rotations have equipped me with the necessary skills needed to be a successful new nurse. I am team-oriented with excellent time management and organization. Caring for multiple patients at once has allowed me to develop my prioritization skills and the ability to handle multiple tasks successfully. In addition, I am adaptable to new situations with an eagerness to learn.

I believe safe patient care is imperative and I hold myself to a high standard when providing a positive patient experience and excellent patient care. For example, I believe infection prevention is vital in developing positive patient outcomes - a value I know to be the standard of [hospital name removed]. As a hospital that has received a distinguished award in eliminating catheter-associated urinary tract infections from the U.S Department of Health and Human Services, I believe my values are highly compatible with the goals and achievements of [hospital name removed] In addition, I believe I can be a valuable asset in representing and helping to maintain this level of distinction.

I look forward to meeting you, please do not hesitate to contact me at [phone number removed]

Sincerely,

[name removed]

[wonderwoman92]

Hi,

Your cv looks good, but I would suggest personalizing to the position you're applying for. It seems too 'clean cut' to me. What position are you applying for?