Desperate (old) new graduate. Please review my resume and cover letter. Thank you!

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Before I get to the point of this post I would like to thank everyone in advance for taking the time to read this and reply with some feedback. Any criticism would be helpful and greatly appreciated. I'll try and keep the post as short as possible.

I completed my nursing program in May 2011 with an Associates Degree in Nursing and graduated in August 2011. January 2012 I passed the NCLEX-RN and am now a licensed RN in New York State.

For the past 8 months I've been applying daily and have yet to receive any job offers. The only interview I have been able to land has been an RN position in the Emergency Department (my ultimate goal, however I will take ANYTHING* in acute care). This job hunting has been stressful to say the least. I'm feeling frustrated and starting to feel lost at the moment. Currently I'm looking into volunteer work and enrolling in an RN-BSN program (beginning in spring 2013).

What else can I do to gain the necessary experience to obtain an entry level position in acute care?

Are there any hospitals that are friendly to new graduate RNs? I will move anywhere provided I'm able to gain employment**.

Please be brutally honest. All suggestions and help are greatly appreciated! Resume/ cover letter:

My name

xxx Country Club Lane

Pomona, NY, 10xxx

[email protected]

Contact Number (845) 555-5555

08/ 08/2012

Name of recruiter

Recruiter for Nursing Positions

Wxxxxxx Medical Center

xxx East Main Street

Mt. Kisco, NY 1xxxx

Dear Mx. xxxx,

I was pleased to learn of your need for an Emergency Department Registered Nurse, as my career goals are directly in line with this opportunity.

My educational background and work experience have provided me with an excellent foundation required to be an effective part of your team. I am confident that a challenging environment such as yours will provide an excellent opportunity to best utilize my skills while contributing to the healthcare community, patients and their families. My strong initiative and passion to learn, combined with my ability to work well under pressure, will enable me to make a substantial contribution to Northern Wxxxxxxx Hospital.

I look forward to an interview with you to discuss my education and experience. Please contact me at (845) 555-5555 or at the address above. I have enclosed a copy of my resume with this letter. Thank you for your attention and consideration.

Sincerely,

Cxxxx Bxxxxxx, RN

Cxxxx Mxxxxxx Bxxxxxx, R.N.

555 Country Club Lane ● Pomona, NY, 1xxxx ● (845) 555-5555 ● [email protected]


CLINICAL EXPERIENCE

Medical / Surgical II- Good Samaritan Hospital, Suffern, NY (Spring 2011)

Pediatric- Nyack Hospital, Nyack, NY (Spring 2011)

Medical / Surgical I- Good Samaritan Hospital, Suffern, NY (Fall 2010)

Maternity- Good Samaritan Hospital, Suffern, NY (Fall 2010)

Psychiatric- Summit Park Hospital, Pomona, NY / Rockland Psychiatric Center, Orangeburg, NY (Spring 2010)

Orthopedic / Rehabilitation- Helen Hayes Hospital, West Haverstraw, NY (Spring 2010)

Geriatrics / Community Health- Summit Park Hospital, Pomona, NY (Fall 2009) Northern Manor Multi-care Center, Nanuet, NY (Spring 2009)

ADDITIONAL WORK EXPERIENCE

Teaching Assistant- Rockland Learning Center, Pomona, NY. Planned age appropriate activities for preschool children. (Summer 2006- Present)

Microfilm Data Clerk- Smooth Solutions, Lodi, NJ. Worked collaboratively with team members. Organized medical and legal documents for conversion to micrograph film. (May 2012- July 2012)

Waiter- Top Notch Catering, NY. Displayed ability to communicate effectively with clients of diverse cultural backgrounds. Provided customer services. (July 2005- Spring 2006)

VOLUNTEER

Mentor- SUNY Rockland Community College, Suffern, NY. Volunteer Mentor (Fall 2010- Spring 2011)

EDUCATION

Associates of Science in Nursing, SUNY Rockland Community College, Suffern, NY (August 2011)

CERTIFICATION

Registered Nurse in New York State

BLS certification through American Heart Association

OTHER SPECIAL SKILLS

Proficient with Microsoft Office, Microsoft Word, and other various data entry software.

iliketosneeze,

I just wanted to ask if you are truly comfortable with the possibility that with the information you have given, there is a chance that someone might be able to identify you. Someone recently posted an article on AllNurses that speaks of some of the undesirable outcomes that have happened to certain members when they have been identified through their posts. I don't know if you are a new member, but I know you can edit your post for a certain time if you have an unpaid membership; I believe if you want to edit your post after that time period you have to contact the help desk.

I can see by the info provided we live like 1 town away from each other :blink:

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