Can Someone Help Me With My Essay ASAP?

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I have everything I want to say in it but it's not flowing and not the best in my eyes. Can someone that's good with writing essays and checking grammar help me asap? TIA

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Specializes in Hospital Education Coordinator.

my advice is to contact the school tutor service, if any. I used to get help from the journalism and English and education majors.

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When I write essays, I write all the things I want to say, and then group those things. Then separate out what to lead with and what to end with.

Groupings turn into paragraphs, and add the lead for a thesis and recap for the ending. Grouping or paragraphs by thought or chronology helps the all around flow and comprehension of the essay.

best of luck,:nurse:

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Same with matilda123, when I wrote my essay, I was writing a self profile at first then it turned into a semi-essay of some sort. So it turned out to be a big ramble of my past/current experiences then it some personal information as to what persuaded me to become a nurse (not because I wanted to be a nurse to help people because that is so cliche, but why I wanted to help people if you know what I mean). Then I looked at what I wrote and I grouped them in a time line. I organized my thoughts and took out the irrelevant stuff and worked on the relevant stuff and added on to it to make it "shine." I didn't even put an introductory paragraph since what ever I tried to write always turned out so "cliche!" But I did emphasize on the body of the text though.

Use strong words also like, excellent instead of good, stuff like that.

Then I just added a simple closing remark like:

"In closing, blah blah...excellent candidate for apposition in your Nursing School. I am very compassionate blah blah...strong science background and previous exposure to the medical field. blah blah...excellent support from colleagues, family, and friends throughout the years, and blah blah....I feel that I am ready for this next step in my career development. Thank you for this opportunity. blah blah....etc...."

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Then I just added a simple closing remark like:

"In closing, blah blah...excellent candidate for apposition in your Nursing School. I am very compassionate blah blah...strong science background and previous exposure to the medical field. blah blah...excellent support from colleagues, family, and friends throughout the years, and blah blah....I feel that I am ready for this next step in my career development. Thank you for this opportunity. blah blah....etc...."

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I hope you left the "blah blah" out of your essay!!! LOL!!:chuckle:chuckle:chuckle

Sorry, cleaning today, must be the chemicals!:banghead:

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Then I just added a simple closing remark like:

"In closing, blah blah...excellent candidate for apposition in your Nursing School. I am very compassionate blah blah...strong science background and previous exposure to the medical field. blah blah...excellent support from colleagues, family, and friends throughout the years, and blah blah....I feel that I am ready for this next step in my career development. Thank you for this opportunity. blah blah....etc...."

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I hope you left the "blah blah" out of your essay!!! LOL!!:chuckle:chuckle:chuckle

Sorry, cleaning today, must be the chemicals!:banghead:

Crap....that's why they didn't accept me....or is that the real reason why they accepted me? LOL

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We didn't have to do an essay. Thank goodness I didn't have to write one because I might have had to resort to begging so that they would let me in.

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