About Follow-Up Thank You Note after the interview, plz help me!!!!?

[tavia_yeung]

Can someone please help me correct my grammars and if it doesnt sound right plz help me worded to make it sound better. Do I need to remove any words/sentences? Also is there anything else you think I need to add to this thank you message too plz let me know. Thx!!:)

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Date

Interviewer Name

Interviewer Title

Company Name

Street Address

City, State, Zip

Dear Ms. Interviewer:

Thank you so much for taking the time to interview me yesterday (3/26) for the caregiver position. I would be very happy to join the company where my caregiver/CNA skills can contribute to providing the high quality care to the clients.

I'm very interested in the caregiver position and look forward to hearing from you soon. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.

Again, I very much appreciate you and your team taking so much time to talk with me about this exciting opportunity.

Sincerely,

Tavia Yeung

[CoffeemateCNA]

I would remove "Again, I very much appreciate you and your team taking so much time to talk with me about this exciting opportunity." It seems to be repeating what you already said in the second paragraph. Other than that, great job! Be sure you get it sent in quickly, otherwise the employer may receive it AFTER they have already made a decision.

[caliotter3]

I would also remove both "the"s in line three. Very good. Hope you get the job!

[tavia_yeung]

Thank you CoffeemateCNA and caliotter3 for your help. I just email them (2 interviewers) the thank you message.:)

[caliotter3]

Good luck!

[Ev1987]

I would be very happy to join the company where my caregiver/CNA skills can contribute to providing the high quality care to the clients.

I would take out 'the' from this sentence. Leave it with 'my Caregiver/CNA skills can contriute to providing high quality care to the clients.'

[tavia_yeung]

I already sent the note but thanks anyway Ev1987 for your advice as well. I'll probably use this same note in the future again to thanks my interviewer after the interview so all above posters advices would work for me later too. You all are cool. Thanks again for the help everyone!!!:)

[Ev1987]

Let us know how things go! Best of luck to you, Tavia! :heartbeat:heartbeat:heartbeat

[tavia_yeung]

Thank you Ev1987:)

[tavia_yeung]

So I just received an email today, they invite me to come in for the orientation next Monday. This is a caregiver orientation but I'm very excited, I'll be 10x excited as now if I find a cna job by this summer:lol2::):p

Thank you for the G'luck all