Requesting Resume feedback

[KrylaRN15]

Hi! I recently pass my boards in October and was able to get a job as a home health care nurse. As much as I love the flexibility, I know that my nursing skills will flourish more in a hospital setting. I've been trying to work on my resume - after formatting and everything it's 2 full pages. I was leaving a lot of my undergraduate student organization activity because I didn't have a lot of work experience and wanted to show my leadership qualities through them, but wasn't sure if I should leave them in or take them out. I would greatly appreciate any comments or suggestions! Also, is a cover letter required in getting a hospital job, (specifically in the Metro Detroit area for any of my Michigander nurses out there)? Thanks so much in advance!!!!

NAME, BSN, RN

ADDRESS * Phone no * Email

EDUCATION

Bachelors of Science in Nursing (Accelerated Second Degree Program), April 2015

XXX University

Masters in Biomedical Engineering, December 2011

XXX University

Bachelor of Science in Electrical Engineering, May 2006

XXX University

LICENSURES & CERTIFICATIONS

Registered Nurse Licensure current through March 2016

Basic Life Support (BLS) certified by American Heart Association current through April 2016

WORK EXPERIENCE

Home Health Registered Nurse, 10/2015 to present

XXX Company

• Provided home care services for a diverse population in the Flint and Metro Detroit area

• Coordinated multi-disciplinary care delivered by other health professionals for assigned patients

• Educated patients, families, and caregivers on disease process, health promotion, disease prevention, medication administration and signs and symptoms to report to nurse and physician

• Performed lab draws, wound care and treatments per physician orders

• Reported abnormal findings to physician and carried out any new orders

• Provided comfort while developing and encouraging independence

• Ability to calmly and quickly intervene during a medical emergency

Volunteer Research Assistant, 9/2015 to 12/2015

Yoga for Breathing and Quality of Life Lung Cancer Patients

Principal Investigator: XXX, PhD, RN

Associate Professor, XXX University, School of Nursing

NIH R-15 Funding, 2013-2016

• Assisted in taking blood pressures, spirometry, and pulse oximetry measurements of lung cancer patients prior to and following yoga interventions

• Assisted patients in completing study questionnaires

• Observed participants as they perform yoga exercises to ensure and promote patient safety

Graduate Research Assistant 8/2006 - 8/2012

XXX, XXX University

• Researched, implemented, and modified biological sample handling and data analysis to investigate the aggressive nature of cancerous cells using X-Ray photoelectron spectroscopy (XPS)

• Performed statistical analysis using IBM software to analyze data collected from both XPS and Raman spectroscopy studies

• Constructed an advanced real-time microscopic visualization system with a built-in incubator and environmental chamber for observation of live cell growth

• Trained undergraduate research assistants and high school volunteers on cell culturing techniques as well as how to use various equipment in the lab, such as the Raman system

• Maintained lab equipment and kept lab supplies fully stocked and ready for experiments

• Analyzed biocompatibility, adhesion, and differences of growth of C6 Glioma cells and neurons on different surfaces

National Science Foundation Research Experience for Undergraduates 5/2005 - 8/2006

XXX, XXX University

• Cultured neurons in a ‘class 100' clean room and tested its biocompatibility on different substrates, specifically gold

• Drafted construction of a live cell imaging system using AutoCAD and Canvas

• Researched vendors for environmental control systems required for live cell imaging system

HONORS AND AWARDS

Engineer Alumni Association Outstanding Graduate Student Award (2009, 2010), Etta Kappa Nu (2006), Golden Key (2008), Engineering Student Faculty Board - Outstanding Community Service Award (2008, 2009, 2010)

LEADERSHIP EXPERIENCE

Mentors in Violene Prevention Training, 2015

Student Nurses Association, 2015

Engineering Student Faculty Board 2007 - 2009

Secretary (2008) * Vice-President (2009)

Society of Women Engineers, 2003 - 2012

ESFB Representative (2007) * Secretary (2008) * Treasurer (2009, 2010, 2011)

Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineering, 2003 - 2012

Treasurer (2004) * Secretary (2005)

Retention and Recruitment Committed, 2008 - 2009

- Collaboration between Associate Dean for Student Affairs, faculty, and students

- Implemented College of Engineering Open Houses

- Suggested various ways to improve communication to future students, including descriptive pamphlets from each department, interaction with student organizations, and organizing lab tours

College Climate Working Group for College of Engineering, 2009

- Surveyed alumni and graduated students on ways to improve college atmosphere; collected data and suggested feedback to the faculty

VOLUNTEER EXPERIENCE

Capuchin Soup Kitchen, 2012 to present

- sorted clothing

Susan G. Komen Detroit Race for the Cure, 2012

- staffed information tables at various locations

XXX Prayer Group, 2001 to present

- Singles Ministry Coordinator, maintained website, planned and organized conferences, facilitated singles encounter weekend retreats

[ED Nurse, RN]

Honestly- there is way too much on your resume. I would keep it to pertinent information. The person reading this will not read the whole thing so you need to figure out what will get you the job you want. I would cut out the entire leadership section and anything later than 5-10 yrs ago.

Also- I would stick this job out longer bc you are a brand new nurse. Wait a year, then reevaluate.

[KrylaRN15]

Honestly- there is way too much on your resume. I would keep it to pertinent information. The person reading this will not read the whole thing so you need to figure out what will get you the job you want. I would cut out the entire leadership section and anything later than 5-10 yrs ago.

Also- I would stick this job out longer bc you are a brand new nurse. Wait a year, then reevaluate.

Thanks so much for your feedback!