Would love an honest critique...

[krs10813]

I am a new grad and trying to write my first resume as an R.N. I would love honest feedback, even if it's harsh! Better now than for a potential employer!

krs10813, R.N.

1520 Parkway, XXX, Il

xxx-xxx-xxxx * [email protected]

OBJECTIVE

To obtain a position as a Registered Nurse in a growing health care facility where I can use skills obtained during my nursing education and training, as well as my interpersonal skills to provide the highest level of patient care.

LICENSES AND CERTIFICATIONS

Registered Nurse in State of Illinois, license number xxxxxxxx

BLS (CPR/AED) certified by American Heart Association, renewal 05/2013

SKILL HIGHLIGHTS

Cardiac care and treatment Patient Assessment EKG Analysis

Medication Administration Patient Education Computer Efficient

Medical Documentation HIPAA/OSHA Standards Patient-centered

EDUCATION

Associates Degree of Applied Science in Nursing, GPA 3.85

Community College, XXXXX, IL 2009-05/2012

Phi Theta Kappa Honors Society Member, Dean's List 2009-2012

CLINICAL EXPERIENCE

XXXXXXX Hospital, XXXXX, IL Rotations in Medical-Surgical, Cardio, L&D, Mother-Baby, Cancer Care

Provided direct care by assessing client health needs and participating in the planning of care by collaborating with Registered Nurse. Performed comprehensive assessment and total care for up to 5 patients. Skills used included starting peripheral IVs, Foley catheter insertion and removal, airway care, NG tube insertion, wound care and dressing changes, oral and IV medication administration, administering TPN and blood products, medical documentation in the EMR. Analyzed and monitored lab profiles, test results, and EKG monitoring.

WORK EXPERIENCE

Medical Assistant XXXXXXX Cardiovascular Assoc., XXX XXXX, IL 2005-Current

Handled daily patient flow for a busy Cardiology practice. Prioritized patient care according to acuity and scheduled patient procedures. Implemented high quality patient-centered care and education to patients and families. Performed EKG, holter and event monitoring, general assessment, medical and medication history, lab specimen collection and phlebotomy, vitals and medical documentation on electronic medical record software. Facilitated general office flow by fielding phone calls, scheduling procedures and appointments, data and insurance entry, medical billing, chart preparation and other clerical duties. Responsible for training office staff of procedures, office practices, and computer systems to new employees.

[Bayat]

The overall structure is not too bad. Individual issues are:

1. Consider turning your objective statement into a professional/branding statement, followed by a professional profile section to expand on.

2. Use one- to two- sentence bullet points on your clinical experience and work experience to make it simplier for the employer to read. An employer would have about seven seconds to scan a resume to decide which pile to put it in. So make it easy for yours to get a second read.

3. Consider listing the hours on your clinical experience rotations. It shows an attention to detail. Also consider turning your duty listings into accomplishments that'll offer value to the employer.

[krs10813]

Thank you for taking the time to respond, Bayat! Greatly appreciated.