Personal Statement help?

  1. Hi all,
    I am currently applying to University to become a student midwife and must submit a personal statement as part of my application. If you have a minute and don't mind taking a look, please can you let me know what you think. Constructive critism is most welcome.
    Thanks, Viki:wink2:
    Last edit by vlewis on Sep 12, '06
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  3. by   mixyRN
    Quote from vlewis
    Hi all,
    I am currently applying to University to become a student midwife and must submit a personal statement as part of my application. If you have a minute and don't mind taking a look, please can you let me know what you think. Constructive critism is most welcome.
    Thanks, Viki:wink2:
    Hi Sweetie,
    I can't believe there hasn't been a response to your essay yet. When did you edit the post to remove it?
    If you'd still like opinions on it, PM me and I'd be happy to help. I did read it over the first time and I think you have some great material there. It just needs to be polished up a bit and you'll have a terrific essay.
    p.s. I just finished my personal essay only 3 weeks ago so I am fresh in that frame of mind... if that makes any difference!

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