Personal Statement help?

[vlewis]

Hi all,

I am currently applying to University to become a student midwife and must submit a personal statement as part of my application. If you have a minute and don't mind taking a look, please can you let me know what you think. Constructive critism is most welcome.

Thanks, Viki:wink2:

[LaceyRN]

Hi all,

I am currently applying to University to become a student midwife and must submit a personal statement as part of my application. If you have a minute and don't mind taking a look, please can you let me know what you think. Constructive critism is most welcome.

Thanks, Viki:wink2:

Hi Sweetie,

I can't believe there hasn't been a response to your essay yet. When did you edit the post to remove it?

If you'd still like opinions on it, PM me and I'd be happy to help. I did read it over the first time and I think you have some great material there. It just needs to be polished up a bit and you'll have a terrific essay. :)

p.s. I just finished my personal essay only 3 weeks ago so I am fresh in that frame of mind... if that makes any difference!