Nursing application!!!!

[Lysss]

I have written my paper but want to critique it and want some opinions! How would some of you write this? I am also having a hard time introducing the paper.

"Describe a time when you had an opportunity to make a decision or choose an action that was different than your group, friend or peers. Did you make the decision to go with the group or to follow your own inclination? Reflect on the outcomes of your choice."

[Extra Pickles]

If you already wrote it and are asking for it to be critiqued you have to post it so we can read it. Otherwise this looks like you are asking us to write it for you.

[FutureNurseInfo]

The gist of the prompt is "are you a team player?" However, it also seems that at times you have to be a team player, while other times you have to make decisions on your own.