Job Help

I've recently been referred to a hospital with open positions by my professor.

However I have an incredible case of the jitters.

I'm asking if someone could maybe give me a bit of critique about my statement to the boards person of the hospital I'm sending my résumé to.

What I plan to send her in the emails message section (my résumé is attached).

'Good Afternoon!

My name is AR. I was referred to you by my Professor, KD.

I am a new graduate LPN and I would really appreciate if you could review my résumé for an opportunity to work with your hospital.

Thank You,

AR'

Please tell me if I should add more, take out, or re word. I have a cover letter that I was is very nice but I don't have the person name or gender to tweak it to fit the circumstances and my professor is already gone and probably won't return my phone all until tomorrow.

Thanks in advance. I honestly really appreciate this.