Can anyone please correct my admission essay for nursing CAS application?

[nurseinnyc&nj, BSN, MSN, RN, APRN, NP]

Hello

I am applying to umdnj and cuny-hunter accelerated nursing programs through nursing CAS application.

Their essay question is "What was your reason for choosing nursing as a career? Do you have any additional info that you would like the admissions committee to know about you that has not been previously considered in the application?"

I wrote a short essay for that prompt but I need proof-readers for my essay.

Please correct my grammatical errors (english is my 2nd language...) or any awkward sentences, or improve my sentences...

If you could spend some time, please let me know...Any help will be greatly appreciated and it means alot to me.

Thank you!!!!!!!