I'm working on a clinical case management project for school and came across this article. I started laughing out loud when I read this sentence. Does anyone else think the latter part of the sentence could be rephrased to be a bit more clear?
"Although men are still more likely to smoke than women, {25%
vs. 20.2%, respectively), cigarette smoking appears to
be more hazardous to women's cardiovascular health than men."
Specializes in cardiac, ortho, med surg, oncology.
Good one. Took me reading it twice before I got it. Though I am still unsure which is worse for women's cardiovascular health: men or smoking. Ha ha ha :chuckle
stellina615
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I'm working on a clinical case management project for school and came across this article. I started laughing out loud when I read this sentence. Does anyone else think the latter part of the sentence could be rephrased to be a bit more clear?

"Although men are still more likely to smoke than women, {25%
vs. 20.2%, respectively), cigarette smoking appears to
be more hazardous to women's cardiovascular health than men."
Journal of Cardiovascular Nursing
Vol, 20, No. 6, pp 433-441 | © 2005 Lippincott Williams & Wilkins, Inc.