Transitioning to Medical, Critique my resume!

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Hi All,

I have been working in psych since i graduated in 2013 and have really wanted to join the medical side for a while. My hospital system is striking and I can't continue working at a place that does not value its employees, and I see no point in keeping my seniority (3 years HA) if there will be no benefits left 20 years from now. SO I'm asking for your help. I'm applying for float pool positions and general med/surg to get my feet back on the ground. Please give me feedback on my resume and cover letter! You guys rock!

I'm not so saavy on how to attach things here, so I copied and pasted the best I could. The style looks different (bolded items, spaced out, etc) but content is what I'm most worried about. Thank you!!!

OBJECTIVE

Caring and motivated RN with crisis management and leadership skills seeking a nursing position on a *** unit at *** hospital

EDUCATION

SEPTEMBER 2009- MAY 2013 St. Catherine University St. Paul, MN

BACHELOR OF SCIENCE IN NURSING

• Minor in Spanish

EXPERIENCE

6/1/2014 TO PRESENT

Abbott Northwestern Hospital Minneapolis, MN

CHILD/ADOLESCENT RN

• Stabilize patient during mental health emergency while managing Mental Health Associate and security aid, including leading restraint application and other restrictive procedures

• Assess medical needs and provide intervention as appropriate, including assessment and dressing of wounds and monitoring for side effects of medications

• Promote safety of patients during hospital stay by assessing suicidality of patient, encouraging the use of new coping skills for mental illnesses, and identifying areas of risk on the unit

• Organize therapeutic activities for groups of up to 10 patients ages 6-18, with a focus on education about illness and coping skills

• Coordinate the implementation of individual plans of care for patients with the interdisciplinary team, including psychiatrist, pediatrician, occupational therapist, and social worker

8/1/2013 TO 6/1/2014

Therapeutic Education Alternative Apple Valley, MN

PARAPROFESSIONAL

• Implemented charting and behavioral management techniques to track and evaluate student progress

• Administered medications as scheduled and as needed, assess students with illness or minor injuries

• Provided instruction and managed educational and therapeutic programs for students with varying degrees of mental illnesses

• Maintained student and staff safety by employing de-escalation techniques in crisis situations, including the use of Professional Crisis Management and hands-on techniques

5/1/2013 TO 9/1/2013

Skyhawks Sports Academy Various Locations, MN

PROGRAM DIRECTOR

• Corresponded with community supervisor, camp coaches and parents to coordinate camp resources and schedules

• Delegated duties to staff and oversaw instruction to groups of athletes

• Supervised, structured, and provided instruction to over 30 children at one time aged 6-14 years

1/15/2013 TO 4/1/2013

Vintage Moments, LLC White Bear Lake, MN

HOME HEALTH AID

• Assessed and monitored resident health by observing physical and mental condition

• Communicated health concerns of residents to overseeing RN

• Maintained supportive relationships with residents and their families

• Aided residents in performing activities of daily living, such as bathing, dressing and eating

9/1/2010 TO 3/15/2013

Bride to Be Consignment Bloomington, MN

SALES ASSOCIATE

• Aided customers in customizing and purchasing wedding items based on preference and trending styles using exceptional customer service skills

• Managed and trained new hires on store-specific policies and procedures.

• Educated prospective consignors about consignment process and aided in selecting stock.

• Participated in bookkeeping process, including payment of over 2,000 accounts and assuring accuracy of cash drawer after sales.

SUMMERS 2010, 2011 Circle R Ranch Long Prairie, MN

CAMP HEALTH SUPERVISOR

• Administered scheduled medications to campers

• Assessed and administered first-aid to campers and staff

• Validated and organized health-related paperwork

• Communicated major health concerns of campers with guardians and supervising RN

Here's my cover letter:

Name

Address

Email

Phone

Dear Hiring Manager:

I am writing to apply for a Registered Nurse position at *** on the *** unit. I am pleased to learn of your need to fill this position, as it is in line with my interests and I would be an asset to your team.

In 2013, I graduated from St. Catherine University, where I successfully completed a variety of clinical experiences that prepared me for a diverse patient population and allowed me to develop excellent critical thinking skills. Since graduating, I have been employed at Abbott Northwestern Hospital on the Child/Adolescent Psychiatry unit. My employment there has developed my communication and leadership skills as I have recently been trained as a charge nurse.

My references, if requested, will attest that I have utilized my education to help prepare me for a wide variety of patient populations as a positive, forward-thinking new nurse. I believe that my experiences have prepared me for a nursing position at ***, and I look forward to speaking with you soon regarding employment opportunities. Please do not hesitate to contact me at *my phone number* if you have any questions regarding my application.

Sincerely,

My name

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I tried to take pictures from my phone too, but they didn't work out too well. Sorry, I promise I'm fluent in Epic. :up:

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You want to keep the action words in the past tense for all your experience. I know, you're currently working there now, but if the resume doesn't have consistency, it won't look professional. Good luck!

6/1/2014 TO PRESENT

Abbott Northwestern Hospital Minneapolis, MN

CHILD/ADOLESCENT RN

• StabilizeD patient during mental health emergency while managing Mental Health Associate and security aid, including leading restraint application and other restrictive procedures

• AssessED medical needs and provide intervention as appropriate, including assessment and dressing of wounds and monitoring for side effects of medications

• PromoteD safety of patients during hospital stay by assessing suicidality of patient, encouraging the use of new coping skills for mental illnesses, and identifying areas of risk on the unit

• Organize therapeutic activities for groups of up to 10 patients ages 6-18, with a focus on education about illness and coping skills

• Coordinate the implementation of individual plans of care for patients with the interdisciplinary team, including psychiatrist, pediatrician, occupational therapist, and social worker

8/1/2013 TO 6/1/2014

Therapeutic Education Alternative Apple Valley, MN

PARAPROFESSIONAL

• Implemented charting and behavioral management techniques to track and evaluate student progress

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Good thought! It bothered me too but it also feels weird to write it in past tense. I think I'll change that.

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