Published Dec 13, 2012
pnkgirl25
354 Posts
First Last Name
Address
City State, Zip Code
© Phone Number
(e) Email
Career Objective
Nursing Student, Certified CNA/Home Health Aid and Phlebotomist trained individual is seeking part-time or per diem CNA, Home Health Aid or Patient Care Technician position that will allow me to advance my skills in the medical industry.
Skills
Core Competencies
Patient Care * Safety and Monitoring * Medical Terminology * CPR * Phlebotomy * HIPAA Regulations
Professional Experience
Caregiver Company, City State Caregiver August 2012-Present
Private Duty-Family Name, City State Care Giver/Dementia Care October 2010-August 2012
Company Name, City CA Account Executive April 2008-August 2010
Professional Development & Education
Angeles Institute Licensed Vocational Nurse In Progress
Long Beach Adult School Certified Nursing Assistant & Home Health Training December 2012
American Red Cross BLS/CPR December 2012 Cerritos College Phlebotomy Certification Septermber 2012
Long Beach City College AA Degree/Communications June 2010
Warren High School General Education/High School Diploma June 1998
State Licenses
State of California Certified Nursing Assistant December 2012
State of California Home Health Aid December 2012
****Also I have more work history then what is listed (but all administartive) I left it out becuase its not really valid and whould have pushed my resume to more then two pages. Should I keep it off or should I add it in?
Anyone...please? I could really use the feedback
werty86
14 Posts
hi there. i'll give it a try. to me.. your resume is extremely wordy.. way too long for someone who is showing that s/he has been working for only 4 years. you should better categorize and organize your tasks/duties. some of them are obvious to the position and some are repeated. just make sure your most important tasks/duties are listed first.
let me first critique what you have for your current employer:
Hands-on assistance with Activates of Daily Living
Assist with general skin care
Assist with transfers (bed to chair, chair to bed, chair to commode, and wheel-chair to car)
Empty or change external urinary and ostomy bags.
Assist with clients directed non-invasive care
Assist clients with blood sugar checks
Provided companionship and conversation
Provided stabilization and assistance with walking
Prepared meals and cleaning up meal-related items
Provided medication reminders and appointment reminders
i would change this to:
Caregiver Company, City State August 2012-Present
Home Caregiver
-Assist with general skin care/blood sugar checks/meal preparation and clean up
-Empty/change external urinary and ostomy bags
-Assist with walking/transfers: to and from bed/chair/commode/wheel-chair/car
-Provide medication/appointment reminders
-Provide companionship/conversation
Private Duty-Family Name, City State October 2010-August 2012
Home Caregiver for end stage dementia client
-Provided personal care services: bathing/skin care/oral care/bed pan/bed making
-Assisted with medications/procedures as directed and prescribed by physician
-Measured and recorded intake/output and weight gain/loss
-Emptied catheter/colostomy drainage bags
-Supported plan of care by assisting with enema cleansing/hot and cold applications/simple non-sterile dressing
-Provided encouragement/emotional support to client ad family
-Supported plan of rehabilitation by assisting with transfers/walking/ROM exercises
-Documented and reported daily observations/services/activities/condition changes to nurse/therapist
for places of employment that are kind of irrelevant to a position you are seeking, just keep it basic and simple because if it's in a different line of business, no one really knows what you are talking about. i think you should just limit the tasks/duties to the most important.. you have too many...
Company Name, City CA April 2008-August 2010
Account Executive
-Secured and maintained new/current accounts
-Assisted customers during showroom visits
-Provided merchandise up-sells and closing sales
-Served as liaison between local office and warehouses
-Maintained client files: quotes/invoices/orders/cancellations/payments
-Oversaw all order changes/cancellations to ensure proper procedures were met
-Coordinated delivery/pickup/setup logistics
-Managed scheduling/hiring/training/payroll
other things... if you decide to leave your high school on your resume, i think you should put your previous administrative jobs on it to show that you didn't just start working in 2008. you graduated high school in 1998, they might wonder why there is a large gap in your timeline ..like why is 10 yrs of your life missing on your resume?... so i would list them and for the task/duties, i would just list maybe two of three of the most important since they are kind of irrelevant.
for your skills section, a lot of them are repeated below as your tasks/duties and then some of your tasks/duties are not listed up here. and then you also mention residents/clients/patients.. which is kind of inconsistent.. i personally wouldn't include a "skills" section. but there are skills not listed below as your tasks/duties which are important such as your to organize it better. your last line: "Capable of managing bowel and bladder and recording results" made me laugh! haha.
i hope this helps some!