Passion statement

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Hello I just recently applied to Chamberlain College of Nursing and I had to write a small paragraph describing what my passion for nursing was. I submitted my application, took the Hesi passed and all but my advisor gave me the ability to rewrite my small paragraph if I needed to. Just to be on the safe side I did....

I just wanted to see if I could get anyone's feedback on what I currently have. This is just pretty much my stance and journey but I know I have to rewrite it properly with grammar and better wording. I'm just a little lost.

thanks for any help

My passion for becoming a Registered Nurse...

My mind was set on pursuing the medical field fresh out of high school. To get a head start I attended technical college and got a degree as a Medical assistant. During the process I knew my passion was caring for others. I was employed for three years while attending college part time. When I was finally ready to dedicate myself full time to my studies, tragedy occurred. My father suffered a major heart attack which put him in a coma. I put my dreams on hold and prayed for my father's recovery. After a month in the intensive care unit my father miraculously recovered. During that hard time I didn't have the ability to continue my education because I had to support my parents financially. As the years went by I continued working as a medical assistant putting my passion and dedication on to every single patient. I never lost hope and new that one day I was going to be able to return to college. When I finally got the chance I registered back into college. Since then I have been on the path of pursuing my lifelong dream of becoming a registered nurse. I am thankful for this opportunity which I will forever be grateful.

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Passion statement. Why oh why must a school perpetuate the myth that one must be passionate about nursing in order to be a nurse?

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I'm on the same boat. I guess that's why I'm struggling.

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On 9/10/2015 at 2:45 PM, SleeepyRN said:

Passion statement. Why oh why must a school perpetuate the myth that one must be passionate about nursing in order to be a nurse?

BECAUSE you HAVE to have a passion for caring for others in order to be a nurse. lol

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