Nursing Admission Essay

I am in the process of completing my nursing school admission essay and was wondering if anyone would be kind enough to reveiw and comment on it. Please let me know. Thanks,

[Nrsstudent09]

Sure I'd be glad to help ya out. Just email me or PM me

[lovelylia]

Id be happy to help, ive done 2 admission essays and they both turned out pretty good i could look at yours if u like or id be happy to send u mine.

rose

[ggabri07, BSN, RN]

Id be happy to help, ive done 2 admission essays and they both turned out pretty good i could look at yours if u like or id be happy to send u mine.

rose

Thanks I sent you a PM :)

[143trinity]

ggabri I was also working on an admission essay, is there anyway you could send me yours so i could have an idea of what it should look like...i would love to be able to send you mine as well...hopefully i should be done by tonight..let me know :wink2:

[143trinity]

Lovelylia, i meant to send the last post too u....

but if you would like to do the same that would be good too ggabri

[mandae]

wow... its nice to know there are people who cares.... I am new to the forum.. I am working on my nursing essay...was wondering if anyone be interested to send me their essay.. or would like to read mine.. My friend told me the more proofreading you do.. the better your paper will turn out.. Thanks ahead. :)