New Grad Needs Resume and Cover Letter Critique

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New grad who has applied to 10 jobs only 1 interview I was wondering if I could get some feedback on cover letter and resume. Should I add more to the cover letter and resume or rewrite either of them ??? Do you think these are good enough for a new grad ???

Cover Letter06/__/13

Human Resource Department

Dear Human Resources at --- Hospital,

I am writing in response to an announcement for a registered nurse position recently

posted on the ---- Hospital employment opportunities web site. I feel as though ---

Hospital will provide me wonderful opportunities as a new gradate nurse in that we have

the same mission in mind to provide quality patient care.

As you can see from my resume, I graduate in May 2013 from the University of ---

in -----School of Nursing. Through my clinical rotations, I have had the

opportunity to work in several settings, including precepting in the MICU at ----

Hospital. My experience in the MICU has helped me work on the critical care skills

needed to care for a critically ill patient and taught me how to be part of a team of

caregivers who provide overall quality patient care.

I am very interested in beginning my nursing career at ----Hospital and believe that my

skills and experience have prepared me well. I look forward to meeting you, and if there

is anything else I can offer to you about my qualifications feel free to contact me through my email or number listed in resume.

Sincerely,

RESUME

Objective:

To obtain an entry level registered nurse position at ---- Hospital in order to gain

valuable experience and provide quality patient care.

Education:

University of Alabama in Huntsville, Bachelor of Science in Nursing, May 2013

Northeast Alabama Community College, Rainsville Alabama, 2008 to 2010

Professional Experience:

Part's Specialist, O Reilly Auto Part's, Rainsville Alabama, June 2008-June 2010

Relevant Skills and Experience: 920 Total Clinical Hours Nursing School:

144 clinical hours under the direction of a preceptor and clinical faculty in the

Medical Intensive Care Unit at Huntsville Hospital, January - May 2013

 Performed client assessments

 Assisted in coordinating care and prioritization of clients

 Planned, organized, and managed client care

 Communicated findings to physicians and other healthcare professionals

 Performed discharge teaching

 Assisted with medication administration

 Performed direct client care

 Documented in charting

Certifications:

 Cardiopulmonary Resuscitation, Red Cross, expiration date Jul. 2013

RN TEMP LICENSE -------

Community Service:

 Let's Pretend Hospital at University of Alabama Huntsville, Spring 2012 and

2013

 Involved in Be Ready Camp at Space and Rocket Center, 2011

 Christmas Charity Food and Toy Drive Northeast Alabama Community College,

2008 to 2010

Professional Memberships:

 Phi Theta Kappa , active member, 2008-present

Honors and Awards:

 Dean's List, University of Alabama in Huntsville, Spring 2012

 Dean's List, Northeast Alabama Community College, Fall 2008- 2009 Spring

2008

 Presidents List, Northeast Alabama Community College, Spring 2009-2010

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