So I think I'm doing some great progress on my personal statement, Yay! But I'm still thinking of important things I should write and not leave out.I was thinking of writing something like "Anyone can be taught the technical part of nursing, but no one can be taught to have empathy or compassion..." I wanted to write this to show I am what a great nurse is, and that I possess those qualities. But I'm not sure if it comes out as saying I don't really care about the classes because I have better qualities? If that makes any sense at all.Also, any other tips or things I should include in my statement are greatly appreciated. Almost done! :)
ellieheart 35 Posts Feb 2, 2015 just stick to this basic theme. "I have wanted to be a nurse for as long as I can remember"
allnurses Guide llg, PhD, RN 13,469 Posts Specializes in Nursing Professional Development. Has 46 years experience. Feb 2, 2015 A lot of people believe that education can enhance caring and compassion. So don't say that. It makes you sound like only people with a special God-given gift or personality type an be a good nurse -- and diminishes the science of nursing, along with the benefits of education. Don't insult the faculty by denigrating the work they do.
