Published Oct 17, 2006
]I'm new to this site. I am hoping someone can give me some ideas on how to start my nursing essay?????
pharmgirl
446 Posts
As I was reading the essay I was thinking the same things as Shane, take out the "I"s and also paragraph structure....I got a little lost but that might be the whole "cut/paste" thing on the post. Take Shane's advice and you have an awesome essay. (agreed topic SUCKS, not your fault tho) lol
sun12
18 Posts
Hey Pharmgirl,
Thanks for your advise but who is shane??
OK, am I losing it? I swear there was an in-depth post by Shane talking about the use of I's and focusing more on different personal experiences instead of just the ICU experience............am I losing it???? omg now I'm scared
tiggerdagibit
181 Posts
lol.. it's on page 1. I have to giggle because that is SO something I would do! :chuckle
Thanks Pharm girl!!
:heartbeat
Thanks tigger.....now I dont feel so bad LOL.. I really thought "omg I'm not even started the program yet and I've lost it" LOL