Cover letter critique, please?

[santina44]

Hi all,

I have no experience writing cover letters and just wanted some feedback on the following. I appreciate any help!! Thank you

Dear Sir or Madam,

In reference to the current position, "_______," please accept the enclosed documents for consideration of my qualifications to become a member of your team. As a teaching facility, "hospital name"offers me an opportunity to further develop my knowledge as a graduate nurse.

My clinical training and work experience have effectively prepared me to begin employment as a registered nurse. Through my clinical rotations, I learned to care for a variety of patients of different acuity levels. I became accustomed to performing efficiently under levels of high stress and found this to be one of my numerous strengths.

As you will see, I worked as a patient care coordinator at a dental office. I gained excellent customer service skills while working with patients and their families. I organized treatment plans, assisted the dentist during procedures, and conducted follow up care for patients. I provided safe and quality patient care and will use these skills as an RN at your facility.

I am highly confident I will be able to perform to your expectations as an RN at "hospital name". I appreciate your careful review of my qualifications, as I am eager to be a part of your healthcare team. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

"My name"