Check this please

  1. I'm doing a thank you letter and need help with this...

    "Thank you so much for the opportunity given me today to shadow what CNA's do on (or in) the unit and also for the time and the feedback you provided me with during my interview yesterday."

    Thanks for helping!!
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  3. by   Double-Helix
    The grammar is a little off, and it's a bit wordier than needed. Try this:

    Thank you so much for the opportunity to shadow the CNA's on X Unit. I also appreciate the time and feedback you provided during our interview yesterday.
  4. by   army mommy of three
    Thanks!! It sounds way better!