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Apr 09, 2006 05:14 PM

Need help from a native speaker

by K-OS

Hi!

I study health care and nursing sciences in germany. Soon I will finish my degree dissertation. The dissertation deals with the topic:

"Changes of health behaviour after myocardial infarction - possibilities of a nursing case management to promote lifestyle changes"

Now I need a little help "from nurse to nurse"

I have to prepare a short abstract of the dissertation in english and I am searching for a "native speaker" who is involved with the subject case management to take a look at my abstract to locate errors concerning the language and to help me to improve the style of speech.


Anyone who can help me?

greets, K-OS


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No. 1
from -Midget-
Old Apr 09, 2006, 07:05 PM

Default Re: Need help from a native speaker
I bet if you posted it here, someone would be willing to read it and comment about it. What's a disertation, anyway? Isn't that like a thesis?
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No. 2
from K-OS
Old Apr 09, 2006, 07:10 PM
Updated Apr 09, 2006 at 07:13 PM by K-OS

Default Re: Need help from a native speaker
yeah right...it's a thesis...
still working on it, but it should be finished today.
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No. 3
from K-OS
Old Apr 13, 2006, 08:09 AM

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No one who can help me?
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No. 4
from suzanne4
Old Apr 13, 2006, 08:18 AM

Default Re: Need help from a native speaker
Please do not post it here. It is your work, and you do not want someone to use it before you get it submitted.

How long is the actual paper? Dissertation to us means hundreds of pages. That may be why no one is responding.
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No. 5
from K-OS
Old Apr 13, 2006, 09:16 AM

Default Re: Need help from a native speaker
I'm only talking about the english Abstract: 1/2 page

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No. 6
from suzanne4
Old Apr 13, 2006, 09:24 AM

Default Re: Need help from a native speaker
Send it to me and I will be happy to review it for you.

Sorry, I did not notice the 1/2 page.
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No. 7
from K-OS
Old Apr 13, 2006, 11:19 AM

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thx a lot....email is on the way
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